Still in progress, but I wanted to know what people think of it so far. Ignore the way the girl looks though. She is not started other then her posture. Unless you think her posture should be different, then dont ignore her lol
Constructive Critique requested.
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The wing on the farthest side looks a bit off. I see it coming behind him and in front of it. Maybe if you got rid of the feathers coming behind, it will look like it's not being divided so much.
See the wing in the foreground? It doesn't really dip that low.
Just a thought
Also I think the girl in the background is cute, though I'm not sure exactly what she's supposed to be doing. I'd guess cowering, and if that's the case then yes a different pose might convey it a little better. =3