Mermaid

Perplexity
Posted Jan 17, 2009, 6:27:45 PM UTC

 She has a belly full of roe.

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  • TGPretender
    Feb 17, 2009, 5:08:53 PM UTC
    Interesting... I like the anatomy of the torso and hips as well as how you dealt with the tail (the end fins are lovely). However, the left arm seems a bit off to me. The forearm is very thin compared tot he rest of the body and the shoulder join seems detached, like she's dislocated it.
    • Perplexity
      Feb 22, 2009, 5:16:27 AM UTC
      Yes, yes I see what you mean about the shoulder. It's just kind of hanging on barely, not really solidly connected. I think I lost sight of the forearm when I was doing her hands. Hands are so difficult that I didn't want to erase them once I had drawn them even if the arms were wrong.Baby sucking pacifier
  • Cockimaru
    Jan 22, 2009, 12:24:02 AM UTC
    that's great!!! Big Smile I love how it's all done in graphite, and I love the position she's in. it's really stunning!
  • blackwinddragon
    Jan 18, 2009, 5:35:21 PM UTC
    How is thi sexactly a work in progress? This makes a lovely sketch! The only thing that could be added is 1) colour or 2)a background.

    So far though I think you've done a really good job especially with the scales.

    But there's always room for improvement -- if I may suggest? Her hair looks a little stiff. it should be moving with her, hair is like fabric, it moves with the body.
    • Perplexity
      Jan 24, 2009, 7:45:55 PM UTC
      Yeah you are right the hair looks a bit like one big piece, eh?
      As for work in progress, I guess I thought she looked a bit lost without a background... but I doubt I'll ever go back and put one in, so I guess we can call this one finished! Wink
      Thank you very much for the critiques and suggestions - much appreciated!

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