Goth

Posted Jun 7, 2011, 12:51:03 AM UTC

Critique on anatomy, coloring, or anything else.

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  • Jun 11, 2011, 3:06:16 PM UTC
    Hello A-n-W. I saw in the chatbox that you wanted critique on your work so I thought I'd make a few comments.

    First I think your style is great and your coloring style works fine. The composition here is very nice and her face has a very nice expression.

    In terms of anatomy there's one area that could be a bit better. See the attached visual critique where I've placed a wireframe for the bust and hips. Once I placed this in, I saw that the butt of the girl is ending too far down. Which makes the start of her thighs too low. So when sketching out the figure, draw an egg for the upper torso and a box for the hips to get a better sense of proportion and placement.

    Her gesture/pose is really nice. So keep it up!
    Image attached
    • Jun 23, 2011, 10:44:16 PM UTC
      Thank you for the visual critique, it helped me a lot in seeing what I did wrong, and I appreciate the time you took in making the visual critique. I suppose it does make more sense that way.

      Will do!