Tatsuha Yuki's Bro

Posted Dec 13, 2006, 10:28:04 PM UTC

This is the next part after Yuki dies, I see his bro and mistake him for Yuki, apart from the hair, i just think he's died it for some strange reason!

But everything turns out okay he tells me who he is and i calm down and start to feel sad again, and this is a part of our story where it gets confusing and yet cool at the same time!!! :D

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Zironix
Dec 30, 2006, 9:46:53 AM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Dec 30, 2006 by Zironix
Not bad! The clothes look pretty good and I like the expressions. What I think you could improve on is the head structure; notice that their head look a bit stretched/slanted. This could have happened it you didn't draw it on a table or drew it looking at the page at an angle (I do that a lot lol). I've attached a visual critique to help you help you understand what the heck I'm talking about.

Otherwise, this is a pretty good drawing. I hope to see it finished soon!

P.S. Gravitation!!
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- 839
  Dec 30, 2006, 3:42:34 PM UTC
  Thank you ^_^ and i see what you mean, i was kinda tired at the time and wasn't concentrating lol, but thank u for the advice, i really appreciate it!
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  Zironix
  Dec 30, 2006, 6:08:57 PM UTC
  You're welcome!
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