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I think I'm finallly getting the hang of foliage. I really seriously need to fix some troubles with the pose now, though.... They look flat - sort of cut-and-paste. Ah well, I'll work on the background around them first, so I can set them into the scene properly.

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Submitted by: Minimaid

Posted: May 20, 2007 10:29 pm

Completed: May 20, 2007

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Galleries: Fantasy, Original Art, Realism, Romance, Work In Progress

Keywords: leaves, foliage, commission, romance, couple, trees, embrace, arkillian, garden, wip, sketch, pencil, graphite, julia and bryan - stage 5, work in progress

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Leilith

Total Posts: 12

May 23, 2007 1:57 pm

Good job! and it doesn't look as nearly as bad as you make them seem in your artist comments!

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~Leilith~

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Minimaid (Reply)

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May 25, 2007 10:01 am

[emoticon] Thanks very much. I don't mean to make it sound like I'm dissing myself, but I feel that if I point out the mistakes I already know about, people might come along and tell me where else I need to fix it up, you see. That way my client gets the best I can offer.

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'Normal' is merely a polite term for boring.

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Cheap-O Guy

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May 25, 2007 9:49 am

It looks very good. But the guy's (I'm assuming Bryan) right leg seems longer than his left.

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My original Signature was too long.

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Minimaid (Reply)

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May 25, 2007 9:59 am

Hmmm... I did notice that before. I will look at it again when I get to re-shading that part of the drawing. (it took some damage the other day and is in desperate need of repair...)

Thank you for the critique/comment!

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Cheap-O Guy (Reply)

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May 25, 2007 10:03 am

... damaging? Did you like let someone hit it with a hammer?

...oh, and You're welcome.

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My original Signature was too long.

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Minimaid (Reply)

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May 28, 2007 2:16 pm

Yes, I let people with hammers whack my work all the time. [emoticon]

No, it got seriously smudged in transit. I have to go back and erase all the work that I did on the people and redo it to get rid of the marks.

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