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One of my original characters. I like him ^^;

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Submitted by: Zyephen

Posted: Jul 29, 2007 8:38 pm

Completed: Jul 29, 2007

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Galleries: Fantasy, Mythical Creatures, Original Art, Sketchbook

Keywords: general theil, original

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Draith

Total Posts: 209

Jul 29, 2007 9:48 pm

I was wondering where his mouth ran off to, then I scrolled down and I actually jumped slightly at the jaws embedded in his stomach! ^^ So I guess that's a very effective monster look, huh...
He has a cool form, and a nice dynamic pose, especially for a warrior, not just standing casually.
I really like the mane going down his back! [emoticon]

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~*~Beagán a rá agus é a rá go maith.~*~

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Zyephen  (Reply)

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Jul 30, 2007 4:00 am

Thanks ^^. He's still a relatively new character so I'm still developing him a bit. I'm gonna be extra cruel and have the other general, who is a beautiful woman, be cruel to him. Like always flaunting herself in front of him then being like- 'No woman in her right mind would touch a monster like you.' He plays it off like he doesn't care, but it really hurts him. I don't know if I should have him become a good guy at the end.... so hard to decide...

Draith  (Reply)

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Jul 30, 2007 3:36 pm

Being cruel to characters is so fun... >.> Evil, maybe, but so very fun. ^^
The good vs. bad character decision is a toughy for some characters... [emoticon] I love working through those details, though, it makes me feel more involved when it's harder to nail down the particulars!

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~*~Beagán a rá agus é a rá go maith.~*~

Klepto

Total Posts: 67

Aug 6, 2007 7:49 am

That's definitely one of the coolest monsters I've seen. XD I can see why he strikes fear into the heart of others, with the fangy maw with the super long tongue in his "stomach" and all.
I like a lot of details about him. Like how his flowing hair goes into a mane, his horns and eyes are good, I'm a sucker for pointy ears, I love his legs as they look really awesome that way, and nifty armor as well. It looks like he has a nice big sword too. ^_^
An for what it's worth, I think he's cute. <3

I imagine it's hard getting half-breeds with these guys though. XD The female must need certain requirements to get through it all!

Do you have a full story or anything to this? It looks like it would be an interesting read. A manga would be gorgeous. o_o

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Zyephen  (Reply)

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Aug 6, 2007 3:29 pm

It's still new and being planned out unfortunately ^^; thanks for the comment tho

slightlymadhatter

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Aug 19, 2007 8:11 pm

I wish to be like him when I grow up...

parrotology

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Aug 30, 2007 1:17 am

Holy Mother of Gawd...he's CREEEEEPYYYY Does he talk through the freaky mouth in his abdomen? e_e;;

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I wanted to rule the world once, but I was distracted by something sparkly.

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Zyephen  (Reply)

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Aug 30, 2007 4:00 am

No he talks through telekinesis, but he doesn't talk often anyways. He's mostly the silent type. =3

parrotology  (Reply)

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Aug 30, 2007 6:41 pm

<3

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I wanted to rule the world once, but I was distracted by something sparkly.

Saigith

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Aug 30, 2007 5:39 pm

Holy! I was browsing through your gallery and he really caught my attention. I'm sucker for monsters and guys with pointy ears, and little details. I love the horns, and especially the eyes. I wonder what the colors would be on him, just out of curiousty. Adding to my favorites ^^

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Zyephen  (Reply)

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Aug 30, 2007 6:15 pm

I've actually never colored him so i don't know XD

Dollmaker

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Apr 28, 2008 5:33 pm

Awww...I love Theil. [emoticon] I'd give him a hug if I wasn't afraid he'd eat me. [emoticon]

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