Final Sunset Page 12 Inks

WIP for my comic The Final Sunset (the next 10 pages )

Page 12- Yeah I skipped a page cause the inks weren't 'easy' and I wanted a confidence booster for my hard month ahead getting 10 pages of this done by September T.T

I an attempt to make my art as cool as the writing turned out, I'm putting alot more focus this time into angles, framing and foreshortening cause the first 10 look vanillain comparison- except the last few pages I did, which turned out excellent ^^ (4 and 5 ^^ )

So anyways, cute little Bryan is now about 15 years old and nearly has all of his powers. No beard yet. I haven't broken his world enough for that yet He looks so mundane without a beard *luffs Bryan's beard*

Anyways- crit if you want. I can't do major changes,  but hey- you never know ^^