'Rejection!'

Posted Aug 16, 2007, 6:55:25 PM UTC

If there is one thing I loathe, it is dreadful Mary Sues.

Sara of the two part episode 'The Woman who loved Sesshoumaru' is no exception.

There was no originality to her creation - the bastard child of three pre-existing characters rolled up into one (Naraku, Izayoi and Rin, specifically). And her unhealthy obsession with Sesshoumaru - seriously - made me want to gag.

Given her personality and actions/origins, I think she would be the last person Sesshoumaru would ever give a second thought to if she was involved in a canon story - sooner killing her than remotely considering her as a potential love interest (the episodes were filler episodes; never having taken place in Rumiko Takahashi's manga - and thank goodness for that).

Thus, the depiction of how I envisioned Sesshoumaru reaction to such a die hard fangirl of his. Obviously, he is unimpressed, much to her surprise.

Sara @ Sunrise Entertainment.

Sesshoumaru @ Rumiko Takahashi

Fanart @ J. Doucet (Fluffball). Please, do not redistribute.

 

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  • Sep 20, 2008, 8:48:32 PM UTC
    Hahha she does have "Mary-Sue" written all over her and I'm happy to see I'm not the only one who thinks so XD

    Awesome job ^^
  • Mar 3, 2008, 7:41:39 AM UTC
    Lol, this is so Sesshoumaru-like!
    I really like how it turned out, every piece of it!
    Great job!
    Oh, and Sesshoumaru's kimono is red not purple...
    • Mar 6, 2008, 10:07:04 AM UTC
      Actually, in the manga, it is purple. The anime changed it to red, for some reason (probably thought the color purple was too fruity, or something).

      I think he looks good in purple. XD
      • Mar 8, 2008, 11:51:09 AM UTC
        Sesshoumaru looks good in everything...
        ... almost ^^'
        • Mar 9, 2008, 9:33:53 AM UTC
          Not sure where you're going with that comment - can you please specify?
          • Mar 14, 2008, 4:04:32 AM UTC
            Well... I don't imagine him in a school uniform.
            But in traditional and men's clothing, he's perfect.
  • Feb 23, 2008, 7:04:12 PM UTC
    *snickers* Poor Sara, that's what you get for confessiong your obsession to a Taiyoukai! And she was human, wasn't she? She's lucky sesshomaru didn't use her as a scratching post!
    • Feb 23, 2008, 11:46:24 PM UTC
      That's the thing - Sara started out as a human, and became full demon after making the pact with the demons when she was on her death bed.

      What's funny about it is that she made the very same pact that Onigumo had with his respective demons - and he only became a half demon, at best (who we know as Naraku).

      So, how did Sara become full demon after agreeing to the same pact? the only answer I can come up with is Sunrise was aware that Sesshoumaru would hook up with neother a human, nor a half human, so they changed the effects of the demonic pact by making Sara full demon. (blatant Mary Sue ploy right there).

      At the point where he destroys the demon that is now Sara, it's made to look like he did it out of sympathy for the obsessive twit - seeing as she was begging him to help her before he delivered teh killing blow; but I like to see it as he destroyed her to save his brother and rid himself of the tremendous annoyance she presented him.
  • Nov 18, 2007, 6:01:09 PM UTC
    Death to Mary Suze! Yay Fluffy!
    • Nov 19, 2007, 10:54:31 AM UTC
      Oh totally!

      Though they can be incredibly fun to play with. XD
  • Aug 19, 2007, 11:58:35 PM UTC
    i haven't gotten this far in the series yet so i don't know who that character is but she sounds annoying -.-
    • Aug 20, 2007, 7:48:13 AM UTC
      I have no idea how she is inthe original (Japanese) version of the two parter - but her english dubb? Holy Hell!

      She's just...urgh! And the fact Sesshoumaru is somewhat OOC in this two parter just...yeah.

      All I can say is thank God she isn't canon.
      • Aug 20, 2007, 8:40:35 AM UTC
        is it a movie then? im confused
        • Aug 20, 2007, 8:59:27 AM UTC
          Nope - it's a two part filler arc in the anime that takes place shortly after the 'Band of Seven' story arc.

          Episodes 133 and 134, respectively.

          Its entirely Sunrise's brainchild and in no way associated with the manga.
  • Aug 16, 2007, 1:27:31 PM UTC
    This was well thought out, well drawn, and well worth the pain from laughing too hard Wink I love your humor on this and agree that Mary Sues are annoying as .... well Sesshoumaru says it best.
    • Aug 16, 2007, 1:55:00 PM UTC
      ::snickers:: Thanks. Smile

      I was thinking of a follow up for this piece (Sara in her battle armor) with the foolish idea that maybe it was her girlish dress that put Sesshoumaru off.
      • Aug 16, 2007, 5:31:31 PM UTC
        Laughing Just thinking of that is making me laugh. It'd be even funnier to have Rin in the background rolling her eyes and saying that *her* "Sesshoumaru-sama just doesn't like idiots" bothering him. ROFL I can't wait to see what you come up with. Oh boy the plot bunnies are starting to gather around me now....care to take a few?
        • Aug 16, 2007, 5:56:00 PM UTC
          By all means, feel free to share. Smile

          Heh heh - my initial thought on how to handle it was Sesshoumaru rejecting Sara again (just have to think of the perfect Sesshoumaru decline that doesn't involve killing her outright) and as he makes to leave Sara once again - in a state of complete dejection and wailing about why he refuses to love her - only to have Rin pass by, look up innocently and say 'Because you're trying way too hard, Hime-Sama' - or something typical of her.

          Oi, lame - I know. XD
          • Aug 16, 2007, 5:59:55 PM UTC
            The perfect decline for him -sans killing- is to simply walk away with his nose in the air. And that's not lame, it's pretty in character for Rin....not to mention would be funny as can be Laughing
            • Aug 16, 2007, 6:13:49 PM UTC
              Nah, I think a solitary word would be a perfect fitting for a Sesshoumaru reply. Like 'Pitiful', or for a more lengthy reply, 'You insult this Sesshoumaru with your flights of fancy - begone his my sight' - or something like that. Wink
              • Aug 20, 2007, 7:42:49 PM UTC
                Ho boy, now that came out so vividly Sesshoumaru that I'm hearing it in my head....

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