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Esther_and_Ion_by_Lady_Hisoka

Esther and Ion

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This is a Trinity Blood fan art

DO NOT let anyone tell you that Esther and ion are easy to draw. Esther was a pain in the ass and dont get me started on Ion gad the beads. but I am happy with how this turned out.

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Submitted by: Lady Hisoka

Posted: Aug 19, 2007 4:13 pm

Completed: Aug 19, 2007

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Galleries: Finished Work, General, Trinity Blood

Keywords: esther ion fortuna ion trinity blood esther and ion, esther and ion

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Mr Fritz

Total Posts: 1

Nov 3, 2007 2:08 pm

Not bad.

However, a few sticky points.

For instance, on the dress, the buttoned cloth overlay is too flat, laying over her chest like it's skin-tight -- the breasts shouldn't be in such stark relief against the rest of her body, given the voluminous nature of her clothing. Also, the eyes seem a bit too far apart, and the nose and mouth on the lady are too small, not to mention that her waist is far too thin -- it gives her an unnatural-looking, wasp-like figure.

Otherwise, as I said, not bad. Shows some promise, provided you put in some hard work.