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An origional Character of mine and a friend's. Siv is an elf with incredible fire powers and very little self-control. Here he is, looking at a candle!
Ballpoint pen, about three hours
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Submitted by: 626elemental
Posted: Aug 23, 2007 4:44 pm
Completed: unknown
Critiques (4)Galleries: Fantasy, Finished Work, Mythical Creatures, Original Art, Portraits
Keywords: siv, candle, pen, siv and candle
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 Aug 24, 2007 9:55 amI like the way that you've drawn the candle. the dripping wax looks so neat. A couple things though that I think would help with the drawing though is if the black halo you've got surrounding the character extend out a little more. It's too close to the edge of the character. also, considering the lighting effects from the candle may have added nicely to it too. See attached. --- |
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 SaimainTotal Posts: 127Aug 24, 2007 7:48 pmVery nice! Has a charming and whimsical feel to it, and I love the glow from the candle. ^__^ |
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 626elemental (Reply)Total Posts: 38Aug 24, 2007 10:08 pmsorry, I'm working on re-sizing all my stuff. I didn't realize just how BIG the files were! |
