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Shonon-ai... Japanese for "boy love."
A pic of my friend Kojika-chan's manga characters, Light (the cute blond) & Umishin (he's got the blue hair).
Zos Kias is the name of it & you can read it here: http://kojika.comicgenesis.com/
Anyways this was supposed to be something that would freak out her freind, & I goofed. So now that I know exactly what she wants, I'll actually ahve art for under the red curtain. *laughs* So i guess this can be thought of as the "before" pic. *winks*
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Submitted by: kirayasha
Posted: Aug 29, 2007 4:46 pm
Completed: Aug 29, 2007
Critiques (6)Galleries: Bishounen, Finished Work, Original Art, Shounen-Ai
Keywords: bishonen, shonen-ai, shonen-ai
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KojikaTotal Posts: 5Aug 29, 2007 7:22 pmaww..I think this turned out cute~! hee hee! they both look older here, which is actually a cool thing, considering the after, lmao! actually, Umishin is 19 already, but Light is just17...dun dun duuun! aaanywho... |
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kirayasha (Reply)Total Posts: 721Aug 29, 2007 7:33 pmThanks for commenting!! I'm glad you liked it!! I had fun drawing this even though Umi-chan's hair made me a bit crazy! XD I'm really looking forward to doing that after pic!! *giggles* Now all I need to do is figure out exactly what they'll be doing... *winks* |
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 heartrate monitorTotal Posts: 55Aug 30, 2007 4:43 pmI really enjoy how you do hair, but I think your work can use a little sharpening. It feels very blurry. |
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kirayasha (Reply)Total Posts: 721Aug 30, 2007 4:51 pmThanks. Really? I was trying for a very soft look here, which is more my style than something crisp. |
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heartrate monitor (Reply)Total Posts: 55Aug 30, 2007 4:53 pmIt isn't too overpowering, the softness, and if that was what you are aiming for it works. I am just going by personal preference that the faces have to be a little more defined. |
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kirayasha (Reply)Total Posts: 721Aug 30, 2007 5:34 pmOkay. I see what you're getting at. I'm more light & airy in my work & things don't have to be well defined as long as you can tell what it is. A few lines here & there to sugest something is good enough. Thank you for your comment, it helped. |
