I just finished coloring this, but thought I would upload the pencil version/line art as well. This is a drawing of ChiChi I did around the same time I did my Android 18 drawing in the same kind of style. I wanted to make them look like they do on DBZ except in a slightly differernt style.
I like the way you did her dress and her arms but something about her face doesn't quite work. She looks a little cross eyed. Although I think that's a side effect of the style.
Thank you so much BogusRed! Yes, it is kind of the style to have both the pupils aligned toward the center of the face...but you are right. I think the right (our right) eye isn't quite shaped right on the outide as well as the pupil, and I think another thing that throws it off is the shine isn't quite right either. I spent so much time just staring at this thing, erasing and fixing that it kind of just gets lost on me after awhile.
yeah that's exactly what happens to every artist. sometimes you need to just put it away for a few days and not look at it, then come back with fresh eyes and you'll know exactly what to fix.
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