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Finished version. I attempted to darken the shadows before I posted, but I'll let you be the judge. I love his grin.
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Submitted by: Saigith
Posted: Nov 12, 2007 5:21 am
Completed: Nov 12, 2007
Critiques (2)Galleries: Biseinen, Fantasy, Finished Work, Gothic, Mythical Creatures, Original Art
Keywords: "is this what you want?", gaulzen, vampire
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 pazazzTotal Posts: 372Nov 12, 2007 7:04 amThis is a little better in darker values, but the shadows are still muddy. The shadows around the face blend right into the hair, with little contrast, the inner part of his open mouth should be darker, and there is not a definitive light source. Perhaps try mixing it up with a dark background too. I do like the way you did his eyes, he is interesting. Keep up the good work. |
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 Saigith (Reply)Total Posts: 191Nov 12, 2007 8:16 amThank you for the critique. I'll try to attempt doing better with the dark values next time I feel like doing a greyscale. Thank you again! --- "One step closer and my sword shall find a new sheath." Lael quote
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