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I had an urge to draw a horse. At first I was just doodling but then my friend Hazel's voice rang in my mind, "Not very many people draw horses right." Ok so I didn't do the whole body but I'm really proud of how well the face turned out. I'm debating if I'm going to do the rest of the body or not. The image is actually much bigger then this but I shrunk it by 50% so it wouldn't take over your page.
Edit: I fixed up the ears. I was told that the right ear should be closed a bit more then it was. Its snowing outside so rather then going outside to study and draw horse ears today I looked up horse ears on google. That's when I noticed that they all had more fur in there ears too. So I closed all that up and opened photoshop attempting to firstly close the ear more and secondly to add more fur inside it. I think it looks better then before. But I dunno. Please let me know if you can see anything else that may need fixing. Thanks!
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Submitted by: kenji
Posted: Nov 29, 2007 7:24 pm
Completed: Nov 29, 2007
Critiques (15)Galleries: Animals, Finished Work, Original Art
Keywords: horse black stallion pony mustang face eyes eye ear snow cold wet dark night, midnight snow
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 Nov 30, 2007 4:43 amHe has a pretty face. Love the mane. The right ear seems a bit off. (Included a visual) --- Available for Characater Art Commissions* |
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 kenji (Reply)Total Posts: 84Nov 30, 2007 10:55 amThank you so much for the help ^_^ After reading your critique I went straight to work on fixing the ear. I'm not sure if it looks any better or not, but I tried. Take a look and see if it still looks wrong ^_^ --- Watch out for the rabbit eating bunny. He doesn't like to be called names. |
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wisdom72 (Reply)Total Posts: 317Nov 30, 2007 1:20 pmYea, that's it! I like that little feature where you can visually show stuff. I would have had a terrible time explaining it, lol. --- Available for Characater Art Commissions* |
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kenji (Reply)Total Posts: 84Dec 4, 2007 12:14 amThank you ^_^ And thank you again for the help! --- Watch out for the rabbit eating bunny. He doesn't like to be called names. |
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 scorpioangelTotal Posts: 33Nov 30, 2007 7:16 amVery beautiful horse right there |
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kenji (Reply)Total Posts: 84Nov 30, 2007 10:56 amThank you so much ^_^ I spent allot of time on this. Wanted to make it looks really good for my friend. --- Watch out for the rabbit eating bunny. He doesn't like to be called names. |
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Nataly BildTotal Posts: 204Nov 30, 2007 7:57 amWow! It's an amazing and noble animal! I really like it. --- I'm not a wizard yet - I'm only studying. |
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kenji (Reply)Total Posts: 84Nov 30, 2007 10:56 amThank you so much! ^_^ --- Watch out for the rabbit eating bunny. He doesn't like to be called names. |
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kenji (Reply)Total Posts: 84Dec 4, 2007 12:13 amThank you very much ^_^ --- Watch out for the rabbit eating bunny. He doesn't like to be called names. |
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 Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.Total Posts: 2411Dec 1, 2007 2:16 pmExcellent ^_^ I love how you did the subtle highlighting to show the muscles in the neck and face. Great job very realistic looking --- Yes we can! |
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kenji (Reply)Total Posts: 84Dec 4, 2007 12:14 amThanks! Im glad you like it! --- Watch out for the rabbit eating bunny. He doesn't like to be called names. |
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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)Total Posts: 2411Dec 4, 2007 1:19 amYou're welcome :girn: --- Yes we can! |
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 pazazzTotal Posts: 544Dec 2, 2007 1:35 pmI think you did a pretty good job, but I highly recommend using a reference when trying to tackle a project like this as some of the proportions seem a little off. Having the hair not lay so flat on the neck would help add some excitement to this nice piece. I love the steam coming out of his nose, a nice touch. Thanks for sharing. |
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kenji (Reply)Total Posts: 84Dec 4, 2007 12:16 amI have horses out side that I used as references. I drew them with a pencil, then I redrew and coloured online. I dont like using online references due to having to get promission to use the picture as reference first. --- Watch out for the rabbit eating bunny. He doesn't like to be called names. |
