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Still in progress, but I wanted to know what people think of it so far. Ignore the way the girl looks though. She is not started other then her posture. Unless you think her posture should be different, then dont ignore her lol
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Submitted by: kenji
Posted: Dec 4, 2007 12:12 am
Completed: unknown
Critiques (8)Galleries: Action, Biseinen, Fantasy, Original Art, Work In Progress
Keywords: battle fight angel demon sword hero villian, a battle
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 LoneWandererDTotal Posts: 206Dec 4, 2007 2:22 amits looking good from what i can se so far --- Night is my companion And Solitude is my guide. |
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, really like to see it finished ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_smile.gif)
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 kenji (Reply)Total Posts: 84Dec 4, 2007 5:01 pmThat you ^_^ Ive been working hard on it --- Watch out for the rabbit eating bunny. He doesn't like to be called names. |
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 Fire Angel StudiosTotal Posts: 61Dec 4, 2007 8:43 amLooks great. Even for a WIP it beats the hell out of anything in my gallery >.> *Insert Jealousy Here* --- "You know what they say: 'Curiosity KILLED the cat.' What they DIDN'T say, is exactly HOW it killed it, and what it did to the corpse after it was done."~Tracy |
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kenji (Reply)Total Posts: 84Dec 4, 2007 5:00 pmHumm no she isn't really cowering. Its suppose to looks as if she is trying to get out of the way by backing up, then something on the ground trips her and she falls, landing on her back. Well thats how it goes in the book anyway. I had a hard time choosing her pose though. I tried with her hands downish and that didn't work at all. I know putting them over her head will make it look silly. At the same time Im trying to use her to balance the picture... Sorry Im typing so much ^^ --- Watch out for the rabbit eating bunny. He doesn't like to be called names. |
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Fire Angel Studios (Reply)Total Posts: 61Dec 5, 2007 11:03 amHeh, ahh. I see. You could try with one hand held outward and the other up against her chest, might give more of that expression... or at least that's what I'd see in my head. Only a suggestion though, still looks great as it is. ^_^ --- "You know what they say: 'Curiosity KILLED the cat.' What they DIDN'T say, is exactly HOW it killed it, and what it did to the corpse after it was done."~Tracy |
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 wisdom72Total Posts: 317Jan 5, 2008 6:55 amOh wow! You've got some action stuff going on! Nice! Hard to tell what the girl's really doing until the sketch is complete. Can't wait to see when it is! --- Available for Characater Art Commissions* |
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wisdom72Total Posts: 317Jan 5, 2008 7:12 amOkay, maybe I do have one suggestion --- Available for Characater Art Commissions* |
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wisdom72Total Posts: 317May 29, 2008 1:32 pmHey, just wondering if you're planning to finish this piece. I always liked the sketch --- Available for Characater Art Commissions* |
