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Vegeta+Bulma - Tender Touch
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It's been a while since I've drawn Vegeta fanart. He's still the hottest anime character in my mind. Here he is tenderly embracing Bulma.
It's been forever since I've drawn for myself (as apposed to drawing for work/school). I'm fairly satisfied with this sketch. The only things I'm unhappy about at the moment are Bulma's skirt and her hand. I'll probably take a day's break from this and come back to adjust it.
Red pen crits welcome.
I do intend to color this after I get the line art finished ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_veryhappy.gif)
Vegeta and Bulma from Dragon Ball Z are (c) Akira Toriyama, etc.
[REVISION] - Dec 7
I've uploaded my revision to the linework. I've received some good comments on Bulma. I've revised her hand and her skirt as well as a couple little tweaks on her shirt and legs.
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Submitted by: BogusRed
Posted: Dec 4, 2007 1:28 am
Completed: Dec 4, 2007
Critiques (22)Galleries: Biseinen, Dragon Ball Z, Romance, Work In Progress
Keywords: romance, love, dragon ball z, dbz, vejiita, bulma, vegeta, vegeta+bulma - tender touch
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 DollmakerTotal Posts: 2511 |
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 BogusRed (Reply)Total Posts: 2854Dec 4, 2007 9:14 amThank you Dollmaker --- |
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 lacewingTotal Posts: 34Dec 4, 2007 8:59 am*takes a breath* The hand has fingers that are not smooth, and the pinky starts further off the hand than the other fingers if you where to line the curve of the knuckles up. |
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BogusRed (Reply)Total Posts: 2854Dec 4, 2007 9:13 amThank you for the crit Lacewing. It was very helpful. --- |
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lacewing (Reply)Total Posts: 34Dec 4, 2007 9:03 pmThanks. I have a hard time doing written crits, often I will print out the image, draw over it.. and scan it back |
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BogusRed (Reply)Total Posts: 2854Dec 4, 2007 9:05 pmyeah i like having drawn crits. it makes it easier to understand often times. thanks again! I'll have an updated drawing up within the next couple days. --- |
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lacewing (Reply)Total Posts: 34 |
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 LilimayhemTotal Posts: 1421Dec 4, 2007 9:28 amsigh...he still is the hottest, I totally agree. I think I'll always have a thing for Vegeta. --- Dont take life too seriously, you're gonna die anyway... |
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BogusRed (Reply)Total Posts: 2854Dec 4, 2007 8:56 pmThanks for the comments Lili --- |
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 arkillianTotal Posts: 3013Dec 4, 2007 2:21 pmI always love how you draw these too- your style makes Vege seem such a calmer, nicer person, and Bulma is very femanine ^^ *snuggles BR* so happy to see you drawing again ^^ I miss it --- |
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BogusRed (Reply)Total Posts: 2854Dec 4, 2007 8:59 pm*snuggles back* Thanks Arkillian. I think maybe I need to do some more drawings where he's a little more badass. --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3013Dec 11, 2007 1:29 pmAwe- there's tons of those about the place- I like your cocky, 'I'm so sexy' version of Vege alot more --- |
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BogusRed (Reply)Total Posts: 2854Dec 11, 2007 11:38 pmHahah there's only one proper response to that: --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3013Dec 12, 2007 3:31 pmJ-T-taaaaaaa --- |
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 Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.Total Posts: 2407Dec 4, 2007 4:29 pmI love how their bodies are constructed and how you did Bulma's hair. The only thing to me that stands out is Bulma's hand Her pinky specifically I might be a tad short. But over all very nice. I'm glad to see that you're drawing again --- Yes we can! |
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BogusRed (Reply)Total Posts: 2854Dec 4, 2007 9:00 pmThanks for the comments Jill. I'll probably have a revised drawing up soon. --- |
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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)Total Posts: 2407Dec 5, 2007 4:21 pmSure thing ^_^ I'll keep an eye out for it --- Yes we can! |
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 SongTotal Posts: 153Dec 20, 2007 3:14 amThis is beautiful. I've always liked the way that you draw Bejita. The pose is interesting too. The way you draw people...I dunno, almost like they're always floating in air. It creates a nice effect. --- We're all products of the womb before we split and divide into sexes and shades, this side, that side... |
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BogusRed (Reply)Total Posts: 2854Dec 21, 2007 10:48 amThank you for the comments Song. I appreciate it a lot ^.^ --- |
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BogusRed (Reply)Total Posts: 2854Dec 22, 2007 12:39 amThanks for the comments --- |
