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This is my final assignment for my color theory class. I recieved an A on it.  It was created at neondragon art, with a mouse and a lot of revisions.  The pallet used was a 25 color monochrome of yellows.  Please tell me what you think or what can be fixed.  [emoticon]

 

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Submitted by: darkchyld

Posted: Dec 6, 2007 10:51 am

Completed: Nov 6, 2007

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Galleries: Finished Work, Oekaki, Original Art, Portraits

Keywords: baby, yellow, cute, golden, gold, innocent, child, hand, thumb, golden innocene

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Helena Markos

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Dec 7, 2007 12:43 pm

Those eyes are rather terrifying! I really love the concept of this, but I feel you could have been a little more robust in you shading, which would have rounded out the cheeks and nose. Also, the drawing of those eyes are a bit skewed. I respect that you did this all with a mouse, but your tools are really limiting you.

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darkchyld  (Reply)

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Dec 8, 2007 9:56 pm

Thank you. Not only did I do this with a crappy mouse but at neondragonart.com which is an oekaki board. I see what you mean about the eyes and the shading, I will definately fix that when I get my tablet and my photoshop working.
I have both but both are being not nice with Vista. I was actually afraid of going darker with the shading, I thought it would ruin her for some reason. Beside the skew-eyness of the the eyes why do you think they are so terrifying?

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Helena Markos  (Reply)

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Dec 10, 2007 1:32 pm

The fact that the pupils don't touch the eyelid make her expression very intense. It's not necessarily a bad thing, just something to be aware of.

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darkchyld  (Reply)

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Dec 10, 2007 2:38 pm

oh, You're right, I never noticed. I have a lot to learn, thank you. When I get a free moment I am gonna try again, only this time with an unlimited pallet.

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