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A test page for a new comic series I might start.
The character with the arm missing is Krayden. The character in green is Laef.
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Submitted by: Murk
Posted: Jan 9, 2008 12:19 am
Completed: Jan 9, 2008
Critiques (4)Galleries: Action, Adventure, Angst, Bishounen, Fantasy, Gothic, Macabre, Original Art, Sci-Fi, Work In Progress
Keywords: kotamayu, kraydens claw
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 LilimayhemTotal Posts: 1424Jan 9, 2008 8:06 amDear god. He looks like one mean mothe?%$//?*%! --- Dont take life too seriously, you're gonna die anyway... |
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 Nekoyoujo (Reply)Total Posts: 133Jan 9, 2008 3:27 pmYou better believe that shi--! --- Well...this is boring. |
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NekoyoujoTotal Posts: 133Jan 9, 2008 3:26 pmIt's good to have you back ,Masta! --- Well...this is boring. |
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 arkillianTotal Posts: 3139Jan 10, 2008 3:22 pmLooks cool- but be careful in that first two panels- the way his head isn't quite split evenly down the middle- It gives the illusion of a wide head. A perfect 50/50 split would be effective here- specially if either panel has speach that coralates to the damaged and un damaged sides of his face ^^ --- |
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