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Final Sunset WIP Pg23

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WIP page for my comic Final Sunset

 

Don’t have a computer till this weekend so I thought I’d scan a couple without my shinny scanner and photoshop T.T Sorry about the quality- the work scanner is crap [emoticon]

Been doing a bit of work without the use of my computer on the comic which I need to get done by March 1st O.o Aiieeee…. Um, not *really looking for critique- I don’t have time to change things, and I know that Bryan’s head in that first panel is way too small (photoshop saves my sorry tush once again [emoticon] ) and … yeah. Blaze is such a sweet father ^^ [emoticon] Yeah- I’m trying to REALLY push myself on these last 14 pages- wish me luck!! :w00t:
 

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Submitted by: arkillian

Posted: Jan 17, 2008 2:09 pm

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Original Art, Work In Progress

Keywords: final sunset, bryan, blaze, drakobitus, medieval fantasy, final sunset wip pg23

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cruffins

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Jan 17, 2008 2:38 pm

aww...it makes me feel all mushy inside.. [emoticon]

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 17, 2008 2:54 pm

I hope so ^^; It's all down hill for those two from there. It's hard to tell without Bryan's running commentary going on why he's so upset [emoticon]

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cruffins  (Reply)

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Jan 17, 2008 3:01 pm

why is he upset? it looks to me like he doesn't like his dad very much.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 17, 2008 3:07 pm

Nonono!! Bryan loves his father alot ^^ His father is about to go and... Oh man- do you really want a spoiler?

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cruffins  (Reply)

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Jan 17, 2008 3:09 pm

maybeeee.... ^3^

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 17, 2008 3:14 pm

OK T.T Fine then. His father is about to do something that will eventually turn his father into a cold blooded murderer. In the script, Bryan talks about why. In this, Blaze is saying good bye to his son cause he know that once he kills, he'll never be able to control the sword again. Equity is a double edged sword- literally and magically

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Jan 18, 2008 4:07 pm

awww. poor bryan. he keeps making me want to hug him.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 20, 2008 12:34 pm

Yeah ^^ The problem is, as angsty as he is at the end of this comic, he'll still get a little worse before my story cause he spends the next 2 years searching the parallel universe for his father's where abouts XD Then he finds Alex- no WONDER Alex pisses him off so badly XD [emoticon]

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Jan 21, 2008 3:13 pm

Huggles for Bryan!! (whether he likes it or not hehe.)

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 21, 2008 3:35 pm

*Bryan struggles for a while and eventually stops and sulks to himself*

XD

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Jan 21, 2008 3:47 pm

*petting Bryan's head* Goood kitty, Niiice Bryan, Gooooood kitty.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 21, 2008 3:51 pm

<a href="http://www.paperdemon.com/comic/page/130/5.html">(But Bryan likes dogs better)</a>

I hope that link works O.o

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cruffins  (Reply)

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Jan 21, 2008 3:54 pm

thats why I called him kitty. xP also, m brother developed a particularly funny way of taming wayward angry kitties. it involves holding said cat down whilst force-feeding them love and petting them. much like one would hold down a spitting angry Bryan.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 21, 2008 3:58 pm

O.o Oh noes- this could finish badly XD You do realise Bryan can turn into air- right? ^^; He's the perfect undercover agent [emoticon] Turn invisible, pass through small cracks, breathe under water... He can knock you out too...

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cruffins  (Reply)

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Jan 21, 2008 4:00 pm

eh, I'll eventually wake up. or I can just stun him with incredibly bad dancing. *grin*.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 21, 2008 5:50 pm

That may just shock Bryan enough into a daze XD Specially if it was an erotic dance XD Lols. Arkillian Dragons are very sexual creatures ^^ It's quite unusual that Bryan and Alex haven't had children yet. USually they shack someone up by then. It'd be really difficult for them though ^^

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Jan 21, 2008 6:28 pm

hmm, i'm not very erotic...mostly wierd...but i do know how to shake mah junk! [emoticon]

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 21, 2008 6:52 pm

Hmmm.... Do you have powerful descendants? You may have luck. Dragons are attracted to women with power. Otherwise, you'd need to appeal to the more animal side to be effective [emoticon]

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cruffins  (Reply)

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Jan 21, 2008 6:56 pm

nope, I'm actually related to a traitor. I just know how to look like a dancin fool. besides, i'm the crazy chick no boy in his sane mind wants to go out with remember? nevermind that i'm good at cooking and like to have fun...*grumble*

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 21, 2008 7:49 pm

Awe- don't say that [emoticon] No- it's not a selfish reason that Arkillian Dragons are like that. They are like that cause the Arkillian spirit wants the best mix for the offspring. The host of the body may actually love another woman, but unless the host has a strong will (like Alex), they'll give in to the Arkillian's desires. If they're like Alex, they can be one track minded enough to ignore the Arkillian spirit and follow what they wish.

To be honest, you don't want to be chosen by the Arkillian Dragon spirit actually- it sacrifices the mother of the child to make the child the guardian. (They don't know this though [emoticon] ) I'm REALLY mean to mah boys [emoticon]

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Jan 22, 2008 5:35 pm

ah, I wasn't saying anything about your boys, truth be told I get treated the way I do because I bring it on myself. I made a bad reputation for myself when I started going to school. but I think I'm going to stop talking now since it appears the cold medicine has taken over my brain [emoticon]

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 22, 2008 6:31 pm

I just thought I'd clarify incase anyways ^^; Alot of stuff about them sound weird till its explained >.> unfortunately it takes to long to tell XD

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Jan 23, 2008 7:32 pm

My summary on Gene is two pages long, and not done yet. I think everybody has their long-winded background stories.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 24, 2008 11:57 am

Bryan's back story is a 34 page comic T.T Then there's alot more, cause that's the entertaining side of his back story. His childhood was anything but nice due to his grandfather. The Grandfather had an afffair with a woman, who had a child that he couldn't claim as his own- yet that child was the only heir to the throne. that child had a son- Bryan. The King is forced to reckonise Bryan as his grandson, cause he has royal markings (the hair and eyes combo), but he didn't want to admit it. His cold attitude rubs off on the servants. Bryan is loved as a ruler though. He's always been thoughtful, fair, and passionate about his people- to death. He's not very good at 1 to 1 relationships though >.> I'm a bit like that too I guess ^^;

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Jan 24, 2008 7:13 pm

btw: what colors are Bryan's hair and eyes? I know the tips of his hair are blond, but I can't tell wether the rest is brown or black. And I think his eyes are golden...aren't they? [emoticon]

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 24, 2008 7:19 pm

Theoretically blond and brown, but I often get lazy and ink his roots anyways cause it can be difficult to tell the difference. Either is correct.

Yellow eyes- yes ^^ It's suppose to be like.. the opposite colour to his powers- wind. IT's not really, but it stuck anyways [emoticon]

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Jan 24, 2008 7:26 pm

kew >3>

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blackwingedangel

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Jan 19, 2008 3:18 am

I really like the way you use perspective and keeps zooming in and out,it adds a lot of live to the comic,making it more dynamic.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jan 20, 2008 12:30 pm

Thank you ^^ I was a little worried that this page may come across a little flat with all the profile pics. They're were the best way I could do this particular time process though ^^ I'm glad it works dynamically though [emoticon]

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blackwingedangel  (Reply)

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Jan 20, 2008 2:42 pm

I like it,looks great.