Final Sunset WIP pg 26

Pg 26 for the comic Final sunset

Well, I'm really not sure about this page. Essentially, what's happened, is this guy (Bryan)'s Father has just stabbed the Drakobitus with his sword, and the blood has splattered all over poor Bryan. While his Father stabbed Drakobitus however, Drakobitus mentioned that they had not fulfilled the prophecy, and they still needed the Dragon of light. Bryan was the only one to pick up on this (being so darn observant- an annouying habit of his T.T ) I was going to have a full page of Blaze stabbing Drakobitus, but this option came up. Thoughts? Is this better?

Sorry about the quality- the scanner at work is CRAP and I can't touch it up untill I get my computer back, which committed suicide 2 weeks ago T.T I just bought a new 22" screen too...

Critique appreciated on if this page is suitable to use. Link to previous WIP page if it is required for continuity.

Should I go for a stabbing picture, or the blood splatter approach? Red line critiques are welcome if you think something completly different is beter