Final Sunset WIP PG22

GAH! Excuse Bryan's discoloured jaw line in that first panel My white-out got infected by ink and I keep giving Bryan a beard T.T Faaail....

YAY! Finally I get to draw Bryan using some of his powers!! This page is cool in my head with the toning on it, cause he's forcing back fire, and I'm gonna give Bryan an air foil effect. The bottom set of panels though I cry for- I ran out of room and didn't want to redraw the next page (which is now INKED T.T ) so its a bit crammed. It should be ok... learning curb XD I'll know for my next comic to plan ahead! *thrusts ink brush into air*

Drakobitus's eye in the bottom left turned out well. I just finished touching up the speech for this page, and its nice and cold

Soon to tone this!! *excited*