Final Sunset Page 22 Tones

Upper left hand panel you mean? Are you sure it make sense reading from right to left and not left to right ^^; It wont make alot of sense without words or previous panels anyways. Essentially though, The first panel is Bryan dealing with a magic blast he got hit with, the next is his sending it onto his enemy, the next is witty banter, then from left to right, the eye onwards, its the evil character saying that he's going to kill the boy and his father freaking out and tackling him out of the way.

A tad hard to pick up without speech. To make it worse, I'm missing a panel between it's page and the next, but that just makes it flow better. It should still make sense.

Yeah- I don't think the fire effect is so important with it being in grey scale. I'm kinda hopeing 2 and 2 will fit together and people will figure it out for themselves. It's an unimportant feature really ^^;

Does it look ok in colours besides that though?

Does it look ok in color? I don't know what you mean. Do you intend on coloring it?

It's a black and white comic hon.... That's why I'm using screen tone :< If you see the high res, all the grey areas are masses of patterns that look crap unless zoomed out, or printed... ^^;

yeah but you asked me how it looked in color and well....there's know color there for me to look at