Final Sunset pencils Page 35

Page for my comic Final Sunset

This page and the next page have been a long time waiting, as I needed to rewrite the scripts cause well- the body of the story was great, but the ending was really blase'... I wanted to end on something a bit better. (And isn't little Blaze so cute? ^^ Cuddling up to his daddy ^^ )

So these are nearly finished pencils. I'm gonna put this on roast me, cause I want to know if these pages are aesthetically layed out. I'm not worried if the people have acurate proprtions or anything. Let me know your thoughts on the page at a distance, and I'd be sooooo greatfull ^^

As this comic is due for relese soon though, I can't take advanced crit after February 2008.It'll be *too late* by then ^^;