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Submitted by: alfi the sukebe girl

Posted: Feb 25, 2008 6:51 pm

Completed: Jul 7, 2007

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Galleries: Finished Work, Original Art, Shounen-Ai

Keywords: shounen ai, don't tell anything to him....

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pazazz

Total Posts: 372

Feb 26, 2008 8:09 am

The faces are cute and proportions are all good. I am not a fan of merging artwork onto a photo unless the photo is worked well, so they blend, as it makes it seem a bit off. There are too many textures used here and they are in your face textures, so they are distracting to me. Don't forget to add cast shadows were needed, like under the hand on the back. Good work, thanks for sharing.

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alfi the sukebe girl  (Reply)

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Feb 27, 2008 5:28 pm

OK....Thank you very much for your critiques...I really appreciate it.. [emoticon]