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What an original title.........
An experimentation on a new style: very, VERY sketchy pencil lines and textures, which actuall works to integrate all the elements of the picture together like pencil oil-painting. What do you think?
An experimentation on a new style: very, VERY sketchy pencil lines and textures, which actuall works to integrate all the elements of the picture together like pencil oil-painting. What do you think?
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Submitted by: puayen
Posted: Mar 3, 2008 4:52 am
Completed: unknown
Critiques (6)Galleries: Finished Work, Landscapes, Original Art
Keywords: ship style impressionism cross hatching, ship
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 wisdom72Total Posts: 332Mar 3, 2008 7:35 amWow! Nice sketch! Fav! --- Available for Characater Art Commissions* |
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 Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.Total Posts: 2426Mar 3, 2008 5:24 pmI always love the amount of detail you put in to your pics but as for a crit the only thing that bothers me is the large amount of white space at the top. I'd say crop maybe a few centimeters off not much and you'll be good to go --- Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings. |
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 puayen (Reply)Total Posts: 185Mar 4, 2008 4:49 amThanks for the comment. Yeah, well, the original is actually draw in landscape with not much vertical space- but I added the spaces in an attempt for another effect: though the finishing is very quick and shoddy, so the final thing fell short of that effect. |
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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)Total Posts: 2426Mar 4, 2008 2:16 pmNo I like the white space around it I think it gives it a really cool looking effect. But just the top part of it has a little too much. Cropping just a tad of that will make it look more balanced cause right now it looks like there's more white at the top than at the bottom. Know what I mean? --- Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings. |
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 pazazzTotal Posts: 547Mar 6, 2008 8:03 amNice work! The large amount of negative space at the top of this piece is a little distracting, but overall, it is very well done. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
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puayen (Reply)Total Posts: 185Mar 7, 2008 12:31 amThanks for the comment and crit. Ha, yikes, two complaints about the -'ve space already. Looks like time to take it out. I'd planned to give it a very simple, large-space, bottom-heavy picture- but looks like didn't execute that goal with enough precision. |
