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Now this is supposed to be Scar from FMA, but this guy looks nothing like him (excluding the hair, scar, and coat of course).

I admit it...the way he turned out was not what I had in mind. It was not meant to be so...provocative, but more...peaceful. Oh well, right? There it is.

I still hope to get the one I had in mind out on paper, but that will take a few tries I'm sure.
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Submitted by: Sardave

Posted: Mar 4, 2008 12:29 pm

Completed: Feb 28, 2007

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Galleries: Finished Work, Fullmetal Alchemist, Portraits, Realism

Keywords: scar, fma, rain, peaceful, a moment of peace

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arkillian

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Mar 4, 2008 1:37 pm

Scar has a provocative feel about him [emoticon] It's the angst ^^ He has it (XD Lolcats...)

His scar needs to be better defined though. They don't define it in the comic cause they're pressed for time and its too clutted for comic art, but for a realism, you probably should give it some texture. Google scars and see what you find ^^

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Sardave  (Reply)

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Mar 4, 2008 1:44 pm

Thanks! I thought it was hard to see myself, but I didn't want to deviate from him too far.

I think you're right, though...especially considering the way he got the scar. I think I may end up going back to him and tweaking it.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Mar 4, 2008 1:49 pm

I don't think it needs much... maybe a slight texture and feathered edges... edges sorta like this thumb skin stretches a little with scars [emoticon] The layers being different and all...

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