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Father_and_Son_by_RaeMae

Father and Son

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"Are you my daddy?"

Lexi felt tears rising to his eyes. "Yes...yes, I am your daddy."

The little boy looked down and the glanced back up at him with those big rainbow eyes. "Do...do you love me?"

A crack split straight through the sun elf's heart. "Of..of course!" he stuttered, stricken. "Of course I love you. Why wouldn't I?"

The little boy shrugged shyly and stared back at the floor. "I dunno...cause...cause you left Mommy..."

Those tears spilled over and Lexi just cradled the boy against him tightly. "Elijah," he whispered softly. "I love you with all that I am..."

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Aleksey and Eli and story (c) me. [emoticon]

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Submitted by: RaeMae

Posted: Apr 8, 2008 6:06 pm

Completed: Apr 8, 2008

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Galleries: Fantasy, Finished Work, General, Mythical Creatures, Original Art

Keywords: elf father son half sun boy man kid child tears reunion, father and son

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Dollmaker

Total Posts: 2575

Apr 9, 2008 5:10 am

This is a touching piece. The story excerpt is a good addition, too.

Mmm, I think it needs a background. To add to the mood. [emoticon] It's still very good on its own, though.

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RaeMae  (Reply)

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Apr 9, 2008 2:07 pm

Thank you so much.

I wanted to add a background, I just wasn't sure what. lol. A table and chair is what would be behind them in the story, but I didn't know if that would take away or not. *shrug*

Thanks again. [emoticon]

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GOD SAVE THE QUEEN

Dollmaker  (Reply)

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Apr 11, 2008 6:02 pm

It's worth a shot, yah?

Well, I like it either way. [emoticon] You're welcome. [emoticon]

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