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Anyways, this one was fun, if a pain in the ass; the hand "holding" the Flame Wolf was extremely good, all the way through; you can even glimpse the hidden thumb behind the flame's tail. :3 I love how Lupin's expression came out; extremely proud of it. And the horns as well. [emoticon]

And the title is of a very cool song that sounds like Aang from "Avatar" is singing. xD

Here's the video I found if you want to check it out: http://youtube.com/watch?v=BqIE0kwnfKg

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Submitted by: CaptainLupin

Posted: Apr 19, 2008 1:55 pm

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: Finished Work, Kemonomimi, Original Art

Keywords: rave, lupin, un monde parfait

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SirMeo

Total Posts: 1

Apr 20, 2008 5:03 am

I don't know about the character so I can't say anythinga bout how well this portrays her, but that, um, Flame Wolf (am I right), looks cool, and the and the hand holding it is also OK. Expression seems to have turned out also well, tho the angle of the head looks a bit... uneasy? Might be just me, though. Horns look extremely cool to me~ Colors are also quite good, though I would've preferred to have more shading. Oh, and I think the other arm is shorter than the other. Damn, that sounded quite... blunt, but I don't think this is a "bad" picture.

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CaptainLupin  (Reply)

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Sep 3, 2008 9:23 pm

Oh, bloody hell, I really do apologize for the lateness in my reply. I hadn't realized--well, I really hope you'll forgive me for this overdue reply! ^^;

Anyways, I'm glad that there are some aspects that you like, and there are some that I can understand your apprehension towards. ^^; I actually only started to notice a few things myself after I had finished it. I hadn't any referenced towards neck or head positions, so I was going based on assumption and fuzzy memory. ^^;

Also, please don't worry about bluntness; I actually need it, quite frankly! But, I am very glad for it, so thank you so much for it; I really appreciate it. <3

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arkillian

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Apr 24, 2008 4:14 am

Small tip with boobez- unless her top goes right under her breasts ans folds over (which it doesn't look like it does cause her right on doesn't) then you shouldn't need a full breast line under her. a small crease line to show shape should do [emoticon] as it is, it looks a bit like an add on. The flamey wolf is cool thoguh ^^

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CaptainLupin  (Reply)

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Sep 3, 2008 9:11 pm

Bloody hell, I apologize for the long, long, LONG delay in replying! ^^;

Anyway, on to the actual replying!

Thank you for the advice; I actually noticed how disconcerting they looked, only AFTER I finished this particular piece. But, again, I thank you; I'll keep it in mind for future reference! <3

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