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Scene from my novel where Keith, main character, is being transported to his new home...in the sky!

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Submitted by: wisdom72

Posted: Apr 19, 2008 7:55 pm

Completed: Apr 19, 2008

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Galleries: Fantasy, Original Art, Work In Progress

Keywords: flight, horses, flying, pegasi, reins, blinders, carriage, pegasus, horse, luxor, sky, wings, fly, feathers, feather, castle, clouds, white, blue, storm, fantasy, magic, animal, animals, way to luxor - wip2

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Sliverbane

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Apr 20, 2008 2:12 am

You did wonderfully! You tackled the eye situation with spectacular results! I especially like how you added the smokeyness around the eyes. [emoticon]

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Guano smells like a dirty sock full of old cheese and farts! - Gonard

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Thank you. I wasn't going to add the smoky look, but then I remembered a nice pic I once saw where some of the white horses had that, and how it looked pretty good. So I tried it. I think I'll do the same to the legs as well. That way, it will balance it out a bit. What do you think?

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Sliverbane (Reply)

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Apr 21, 2008 10:56 am

Hmm, around the hooves you say. Maybe something more gray than black. Or you could give them gray hooves along with the smoke. Nonetheless it sounds like a good idea!

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