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Submitted by: arkillian

Posted: Jun 8, 2008 5:07 am

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: Finished Work, Humor, Phoenix Wright

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Me and ~tao-fetish Were discussing over my last crack PW comic page about how Phoenix had these mysterious bottles of drink... probably 'grape juice' in the hospital in Apollo Justice as well and thought... How the HECK did he smuggle it in? I mean, it's pretty much canon that the 'grape juice' is red wine, right?

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How the heck is he drinking red wine in a HOSPITAL?! XD

So yeah- this one took me ages to colour cause I've been busy/ looking for laptops/ dating under loved boyfriend (I hate being sick T.T )/ drugging self up.

That gotcha sign was a pain too cause I couldn't find an online reference to go off T.T Poor Trucy. She was only trying to help her Daddy out too ^^ Now she has to feel the wrath of Apollo Justice XD Damn that guy is so righteous ^^ He needs to relax and take a leaf out of Phoenix's book and do a few things under the table XD (Phoenix is always doing illegal stuff- it's so funny what he lets Maya get away with XD )

neogen10

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Jun 11, 2008 8:24 pm

The one thing that drives me nuts about your work is the color use.

The detailed colors on backgrounds and simple ones on foregrounds make for a strange translation. The background seems textured and shaded while the figures for the most part are single shades. It makes them pop, though i'm not sure if it's in a positive way.

The reverse may be more suitable as it would draw attention to the foreground figures while leaving the background visible, but without distracting qualities.

THat said i'm not sure if you were aiming for amazing life changing work on this one [smiley] .

And yes, i totally started critiquing this before observing the user.

So... also... hey!

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arkillian  (Reply)

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Jun 11, 2008 9:22 pm

Oh, hah... yeah... No, colour is a MAJOR weak point for me >.> I'm trying my best now days, but for a lol comic like this, I really don't make an effort. The background would be plain too, but I screwed up a bit of the background and my pride forced me to put some more effort in XD I'm not out to be a hero. I didn't think at the time that it was terribly bad... I could've done worse XD Lol. No realy though- if its a comic for fun, it's more likely that I'm less concerned with colour than my normal art ^^ Thanks for the comment.

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