I think maybe his left shoulder is a bit to high and as you go down his arm it tends to stay the same thickness. Try to slim down his forearm alittle and lower the shoulder just a tad. Other than that though I like the way you shaded it alot good job.
Yeah this one has the signature in a better placing.
I think the tone values you've chosen to shade him are pretty good and add intensity. I also like your thick linework.
AnimeBoyToyKoibito is right here. The best thing to do is work out all of the porportions and placement of things early in a really light sketch and save the dark marks and details for later after you've worked out all of the porportions. In fact next time you are working on a drawing, sketch it and scan it and post it on Paper Demon as a Work In Progress so that someone can help you out at the sketching stage so that you can be confidant when you go to the detail that everything is in the right place.
Well lets see.... Hmmm.... the one thing I see wrong is that the left side (our left) of his "pack" should be more to the left to be more proportionally right. Other than that I think it looks perfect. Great job, oh and Welcome to PD!!
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I think the tone values you've chosen to shade him are pretty good and add intensity. I also like your thick linework.
AnimeBoyToyKoibito is right here. The best thing to do is work out all of the porportions and placement of things early in a really light sketch and save the dark marks and details for later after you've worked out all of the porportions. In fact next time you are working on a drawing, sketch it and scan it and post it on Paper Demon as a Work In Progress so that someone can help you out at the sketching stage so that you can be confidant when you go to the detail that everything is in the right place.