Hangin' Around

Posted Nov 26, 2005, 5:35:11 AM UTC
Another coloring experiment. I like everything about this picture except for the sky. I kinda ruined it. 0-0;

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  • Nov 26, 2005, 10:26:46 AM UTC
    Hiya Typo. Welcome to PaperDemon.com. Looks like you requested a roast so I'll see if I can give you one...
    I like mostly how the characters are drawn and how you made the choice to have the most distant layer of trees darker than the layer of trees right in front. That gives it a lot of depth. What would give it more depth is if you had the leaves in the forground really dark and silhouetted. I think also the tree branches aren't drawn very convincingly. Anytime you go to draw something that you aren't familiar with, or even something you are familiar with drawing, you might want to get reference so that you can better understand your subject.
    Also its good to see that you are trying to push perspective on this and on the little guy down below. I think the foreshortning is too extreme though and not convincing enough. It doesn't really feel to me like the bigger guy is waaay up in the top of the tree. he seems closer to the ground. Perhaps if the little guy was even smaller. Not sure. Oh yeah, one other thing to keep in mind, at the bottom your coloring doesn't reach the edge of the page. That sort of breaks the depth of the picture so I suggest either filling it in next time, or just cropping it off. Cropping would be easier.

    Ok I hope that helped Big Smile
    • Nov 28, 2005, 1:08:35 PM UTC
      Yeah, I pretty much drew the tree right off the top of my head. I should've added an extra branch. My goal was to make it seem like you were looking straight down on both of them, but it didn't really come out that way unfortunately. I'm thinking making his feet bigger covering most of his body with his above in front view instead of 3/4. Sorry for the uncoloredness at the bottom. ^^

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