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FIRST OFF..THE SHADING SUX!!!! When I decided that I would draw one of my oc's in a nite time setting, with the headlights from the car as the only light....I got a little, well, stuck. This is a first for inuyashababe69 so please, be nice...but tell me some things I can do to improve it too..LoL.....PLEASE COMMENT!!!!
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Submitted by: Inuyashababe69
Posted: Nov 30, 2005 8:41 pm
Completed: unknown
Critiques (14)Galleries: Finished Work, General, Original Art
Keywords: anime, street nights
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 AnimeBoyToyKoibitoTotal Posts: 901Nov 30, 2005 9:33 pmThis looks good, the only thing I would say looks a bit odd is her left arm (our left). It looks shorter than the right. Also her neck is a bit long. But I think the shading looks great. Wonderful job. --- Strive for understanding over being understood. ~~Its what I live by. |
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 Inuyashababe69 (Reply)Total Posts: 231Dec 1, 2005 9:20 amthanx! --- |
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 Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.Total Posts: 2413Dec 1, 2005 7:25 pmLet's see maybe you should flatten out her feet so that they're level with the road right now they kinda look off balance but besides that I like this piccy alot! The colors look great. --- Yes we can! |
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Inuyashababe69 (Reply)Total Posts: 231Dec 1, 2005 9:46 pmThanx, yeah I caught some of my errors..but now can only get better! Thanx again for ur feedback! --- |
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 Lady Anime79Total Posts: 2839Dec 1, 2005 8:06 pmActually sweetie, I think your shading looks great. I like the whole effect of the headlights shining their light on her. I guess I'm just wondering how the car can be on and the lights can be shining when she has the keys. --- Laughter is the best medicine and your face is curing the world. |
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Ooh! Is it like Herbie the Love Bug? I always wanted a talking car. :et's hope it isn't like Christine. >_< Okay I'm getting a little off topic here. Anyway, I love your drawing. I abslutely love that pose. I agree with Jill that maybe the feet or even just her right foot should be placed flat on the road to steady her pose a bit. But I think it looks wonderful hun. I love your OC's. keep em coming babe. ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_wink.gif)
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Inuyashababe69 (Reply)Total Posts: 231Dec 1, 2005 9:45 pmhey, haven't ya gotten out of ur car then turned around to see that u left ur lights on...kinda like they do in a department store, they get on the pa and say "someone with a white honda, u left ur lights on"...LoL, thanx for ur comment! --- |
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Lady Anime79 (Reply)Total Posts: 2839Dec 2, 2005 12:23 pm --- Laughter is the best medicine and your face is curing the world. |
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Oh my goodness.... you're right. I am so retarded sometimes. ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_biglaugh.gif)
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Oh my goodness. I am going to hang my head in shame now. Oi, vay! Well thank you for bringing me back to reality. You will probably find that I make stupid comments alot. It is just my nature. I think it is all the hair dye. All my love to you. Heehee. Mwah!|
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 Sayonara AmeTotal Posts: 1603Dec 8, 2005 1:04 amI like how you put her in front of that car with the headlights making her pop out. The composition is cool. Hmm... maybe the right foot should be a little longer, on the same level with the left to achieve better balance, and I think the neck is a bit long, but apart from that everything looks great. And about the shading it's really good, I don't think it sucks at all. I totally love it. ---
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Inuyashababe69 (Reply)Total Posts: 231Dec 8, 2005 11:48 amthanx, you made me feel better about my pic!!! *hugs* --- |
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Sayonara Ame (Reply)Total Posts: 1603Dec 11, 2005 12:16 amYou're welcome hun. I really like your coloring style. ---
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 KeenarnorTotal Posts: 2148Aug 22, 2006 11:53 amHmm...this is alright. Weird in some places, but still good --- "...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!" |
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Inuyashababe69 (Reply)Total Posts: 231Aug 22, 2006 12:13 pmtrust me, I can see all my msitakes now! I got a new pic I just uploaded. --- |
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Keenarnor (Reply)Total Posts: 2148Aug 22, 2006 12:14 pmYay! *runs to go see* --- "...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!" |
