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Practice for when I like my work enough not to mess up my favorite Anime dude, Sesshoumaru for those of you who don't know, LOL. Kenshin is my husbands favorite character so I tried my hand at him. I had my husband nit pick a lot but I know he still needs work
This is a colored photo copy so I can still change anything I need to on the original pencil drawing. Let me know what you think.
Oh I know the hair isn't evenly poofed but I have almost given up making it so
and my old man has pointed out that alot of my drawings lean left which I find amusing so I decided to point it out here
Submitted by: MoonDemon
Posted: Dec 15, 2005 9:59 pm
Completed: Dec 15, 2005
Galleries: Bishounen, Fantasy, Rurouni Kenshin, Work In Progress
Keywords: kenshin, anime, samuri, kenshin fanart, fanart
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MOON LIGHTTotal Posts: 18Dec 16, 2005 4:18 amWell it’s good for a beginner. |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 6:27 am --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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LilimayhemTotal Posts: 1424Dec 16, 2005 8:14 amHey, this is pretty nice Moondemon! If its yur first, i cant wait the sesshy you'll do! Great job Cristy! Keep it up --- Dont take life too seriously, you're gonna die anyway... |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 9:56 amThank YOU --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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Lilimayhem (Reply)Total Posts: 1424Dec 16, 2005 2:47 pmlol...it can get annoying yeah! But the result is there!!! --- Dont take life too seriously, you're gonna die anyway... |
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AnimeBoyToyKoibitoTotal Posts: 901Dec 16, 2005 12:27 pmI think it looks good, the only things I would really say was a bit off, are the size of the shape and the expression on it. Remember, most anime people have smaller stubbier type faces. and when you shorten the length, try to loswer the eyes and make the nose smaller. Thats pretty much it. --- Strive for understanding over being understood. ~~Its what I live by. |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 5:43 pm --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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AnimeBoyToyKoibito (Reply)Total Posts: 901Dec 16, 2005 7:39 pmLoL !!! Yes, you must loswer the eyes!! --- Strive for understanding over being understood. ~~Its what I live by. |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 8:16 pm --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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AnimeBoyToyKoibito (Reply)Total Posts: 901Dec 16, 2005 9:19 pmLoL, and when you laugh hard enough, your working out your abdomen, so if I can laugh for an hour straight every day, then My stomahce will be toned!! --- Strive for understanding over being understood. ~~Its what I live by. |
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*CutieAnimeBaby*Total Posts: 557Dec 16, 2005 12:32 pmI like it! You did a good job, just keep practicing and you'll get better. --- "There are some who are born great ,some who achieve greatness and some get it as a graduation gift." - Robin Williams ( hehe I love that guy ) |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 5:40 pm --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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bloodysmurfTotal Posts: 184Dec 16, 2005 12:37 pmIts good for a first time drawing! ^-^First off, his eyes need to be a bit lower, and his face needs to be more rounded and semetrical. And, I think you did a great job on the hair, the ends just need to be a bit more pointed. One other thing, I think pecs should be a bit lower, they look a tad bit too high. Other than that, its great ^-^ Good work --- I
Am A Peach |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 5:39 pmSemetrical --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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bloodysmurf (Reply)Total Posts: 184Dec 16, 2005 6:25 pmNo problem ^-^ Hmm...For this school project, we had to make a business, so my group and I decided to make a tutorial for how to draw. If you want, after my friend scans it, I can give you the part on how to fraw the face. It really helps, and its an easy way to make the face semetrical and such. Just offering. ^-^ --- I
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 6:27 pmOOOOOOHHHHHH, YES PLEASE!!!!! --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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bloodysmurf (Reply)Total Posts: 184Dec 16, 2005 6:33 pmMmmk! ^-^ Ill just need your email(unless you can think of an easier way), and you should get it by this sunday, wednesday by the latest ^-^ --- I
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 6:42 pmcristyd2@yahoo.com or if you use yahoo messenger I'm cristyd2 on there and it has a file transfer thingy. Whichever is fine with me --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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bloodysmurf (Reply)Total Posts: 184Dec 16, 2005 6:50 pmI dont have yahoo, I use AIM. But thats alright, Ill just send it through email. My email is Toxiclollipop24@cs.com , just so you dont delete it cause its an unknown email or something. ^-^ --- I
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 6:56 pmThanks for the warning cause I most likely would have deleted it --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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bloodysmurf (Reply)Total Posts: 184Dec 16, 2005 7:21 pmYeah, I do that alot too. Hehe ^-^ Well, Im off for the night. I shall talk to you soon ^-^ (ps:Mind if I add you to my buddy list?) --- I
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 8:15 pm --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.Total Posts: 2413Dec 16, 2005 4:39 pmWell I think everyone has pointed out already what needs attention too so now I think you need to consider making his face alittle less enlongated and use a curved edge of some kind to even out his sword cause it looks a little wobbly at the top near the handel overall though you are getting better and I like him --- Yes we can! |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 5:36 pmThat darn wobbly was another pain in the butt --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)Total Posts: 2413Dec 16, 2005 5:53 pmWhat helps alot is if you draw a straight line right down the middle of your picture it'll help you see if something is leaning or not semetrical. Or you could try looking at your pic in the mirror. I do that with all my pictures it helps show you what is off and what is right on. --- Yes we can! |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 6:13 pmLook at it in the mirror??? That sounds so funny I think I'll try it --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)Total Posts: 2413Dec 17, 2005 12:51 am --- Yes we can! |
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Lady Anime79Total Posts: 2839Dec 16, 2005 5:11 pmWoot! It's Kenshin! I am going to go with what most of the other members have said... his eyes should be about halfway down his face (I kid you not). And then just fix up that jaw line. I HATE doing anime jaw lines. They are hard to get right. Especially Inuyasha's. Have you ever tried to draw Inuyasha's face? It is so difficult. Well, at least for me anyway because of the sharp angles of it. But anywhoo, I think if you made it a bit more "square" it should make it look a bit better. Now that that's out of the way, I want to say that the proportions are wonderful. You have the shoulders are squared perfectly. And the length of his body is prefect as well. Keep up the great work love. ^_^ --- Laughter is the best medicine and your face is curing the world. |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 16, 2005 5:31 pmNo Inuyasha yet, LOL. I want to screw up my less favorite, favorite characters before I screw up my Sesshy and his little bro --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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animegurl9405Total Posts: 338Dec 18, 2005 3:49 pmooooooooooooooohh i really like lol --- Hazardous to your health!!!!!! |
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MoonDemon (Reply)Total Posts: 595Dec 18, 2005 9:19 pm --- THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!! |
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animegurl9405 (Reply)Total Posts: 338Dec 19, 2005 2:44 pmkewl i think it is good i like it alot good luck with that --- Hazardous to your health!!!!!! |