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Well here it is all finished. Hope you like, because its my first attempt at something like this. Please leave comments behind.
Submitted by: AnimeBoyToyKoibito
Posted: Dec 26, 2005 2:51 pm
Completed: Dec 26, 2005
Galleries: Anthropomorphic, Fantasy, Finished Work, Original Art
Keywords: lonesome aldora, orignal art
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arkillianTotal Posts: 3088Dec 26, 2005 4:49 pmFirst thing- texture- the water should be fluid, and quite often it will have waves going horizonally. If its close to the suface, you'll see diffused light. Having your shading going in one directing like this is good for some things, but not water. my suggestion is poppin over to the stationary, or an art store and picking up a softer pencil that smudges easier, and use that, or a bigger pencil- you can get them in art stores. They're what... 4 times the size of a normal solid pencil? --- |
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AnimeBoyToyKoibito (Reply)Total Posts: 901Dec 26, 2005 11:23 pm --- Strive for understanding over being understood. ~~Its what I live by. |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3088Dec 27, 2005 2:40 amNot a problem- I always try to point out the good and bad with a picture, and supply a reason why for both- giveing ways to improve it if I can. I'm a helpfull person I guess. I juist wish I got some of it when I was stareting out more --- |
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AnimeBoyToyKoibito (Reply)Total Posts: 901Dec 27, 2005 7:20 pmWhy yes you are. Extremely helpful. And I think you made it out just fine by yourself. --- Strive for understanding over being understood. ~~Its what I live by. |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 3088Dec 27, 2005 7:54 pmThanks --- |
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Lady Anime79Total Posts: 2839Dec 26, 2005 8:37 pmHoly smokes girl! Look at the wonders you are creating while my back is turned! --- Laughter is the best medicine and your face is curing the world. |
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AnimeBoyToyKoibito (Reply)Total Posts: 901Dec 26, 2005 11:34 pmFirst off, let me tell you, having your sleeping brother's butt in your face is not pleasnt at all. >< Especially when its a brother who sleeps like a rock and wouldn't wak up if a hurrican somehow came passing through here. --- Strive for understanding over being understood. ~~Its what I live by. |