Pawn Shop Interior Line art

Posted Jan 17, 2006, 3:07:36 AM UTC

Over the winter break I'm working on stuff I didn't get to finish during last semester. Here's an interior of a pawn shop I designed. This is a visual development piece. We had this story called the "Poor Angel" that we used as the story and setting. I used Gothic architecture and the architecture of downtown San Jose for reference and inspiration. This is a work in progress. I'll be doing the tonal version very soon.

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  • Apr 6, 2006, 5:12:07 AM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Apr 6, 2006 by Humority
    The sketch is awesome Susie! I love the composition. It's nice to see the old together with the new,the cookoo clocks sure bring nostalgia.Smile The amount of detail amazed me when I saw this. Great job!Favorite I know I review it kinda late but I just saw the colored version and I can see how different they are.Yes
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    "You Only Live Twice or so it seems,
    One life for yourself and one for your dreams.
    You drift through the years and life seems tame,
    Till one dream appears and love is its name."

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  • Feb 16, 2006, 1:38:01 PM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Feb 16, 2006 by Dennis
    Very nice perspective job there. I love the little details you put in even though its line art. I shudder to think what it will look like when you work your magic. I'm sure what ever you decide to do will be just awe inspiring.
    • Feb 16, 2006, 1:55:41 PM UTC
      Thank you Dennis. I haven't seen you in a while. How are you?
      • Feb 20, 2006, 8:53:34 PM UTC
        Hi BR! I've been gone for a while as I had to take care of some personal probs but now i'm doing great and am currntly working on some things I hope to post soon.
        • Feb 20, 2006, 11:43:44 PM UTC
          I'm glad to hear you are doing good. Can't wait for you to post.
  • Jan 20, 2006, 6:51:38 PM UTC
    Wow Susie, this is really cool! There are so many neat little things to look at. I really like the way you did the stairs with all the thin lines, and I love the gothic looking archways in the upstairs area. The clocks are really awesome. I like the little spiral chains hanging down from them. I like all the musical instruments hanging on the back wall also.

    The only thing I see that looks kind of off to me is how the gutiar on the far right side overlaps the gutiar next to it...to me it looks like it overlaps a little too much, maybe its just the angle though. I can't wait to see this colored, great job! Smile
    • Jan 20, 2006, 9:59:05 PM UTC
      Thanks for the comments Christina. I'll change that guitar. you are right. why didn't i notice it before? lol anyway, this will be shaded in black and white, not color.
  • Jan 19, 2006, 6:37:24 PM UTC
    wow thats awesome. Im amazed at the fact that the glass is actually see through...I can't do that with just pen.lol!
  • Jan 19, 2006, 11:37:37 AM UTC
    The perspective is fantastic and the clocks look really cool, I know the final version will be awesome ^^
  • Jan 17, 2006, 8:24:24 PM UTC
    Wow theres a lot of work in this! There's no roasting to be done since i feel like everything is where it should be, the way it should be! My eyes get lost in this, such depth and details. I love it!
  • Jan 17, 2006, 11:07:49 AM UTC
    I really like how you draw the details, the architecture is great, I am waiting for the finished work, nice work!Smile
  • Jan 16, 2006, 7:26:12 PM UTC
    Wow, Red, you never cease to amaze me. I wish I could do something like that. It looks so beautiful. Everything looks as if it could come right out.