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Not exactly a sketch as much as a picture I didn't finish. Once again, the scanner chomped off a major part of the paper ~_~; The only reason I can think for posting this picture is this - I need to learn poses other than fighting ones. Any suggestions?
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Submitted by: eegirlee
Posted: Jan 20, 2006 1:24 am
Completed: unknown
Critiques (7)Galleries: Abstract, Action, Original Art, Sketchbook
Keywords: fighting stance, harmakhis, eo, unfinished fighting stance
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 arkillianTotal Posts: 3088Jan 24, 2006 10:25 pmThere isn't much to comment on. What is the person fighting? That makes a huge difference --- |
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 eegirlee (Reply)Total Posts: 477Mar 3, 2006 6:25 amIt never occured to me to actually draw Harmakhis fighting anybody... I know she WILL in my story, but never thought about drawing it... *smacks self on head* Thanks so much! ^ ^ --- See the truth all around/Our faith can be broken/And our hands can be bound/But open our hearts and fill up the emptiness/With nothing to stop us/Is it not worth the risk?/Yeah,is it not worth the risk?~Our Lives,The Calling |
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 BogusRedTotal Posts: 2864Jan 25, 2006 1:25 amHere I can again see the hard pressure with the pencil so just lighten up there and don't put down firm lines until you are sure they are correct. One trick to check your art is to look at it in a mirror. Seeing it flipped helps us to see our artwork with fresh eyes. --- Help me squarsh bugs |
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eegirlee (Reply)Total Posts: 477Mar 3, 2006 6:49 amThanks for the tip! ^ ^ --- See the truth all around/Our faith can be broken/And our hands can be bound/But open our hearts and fill up the emptiness/With nothing to stop us/Is it not worth the risk?/Yeah,is it not worth the risk?~Our Lives,The Calling |
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 clawed_demonTotal Posts: 64Mar 26, 2006 11:18 amYou could use to add maybe, joint bends. Her/his arms and legs look kinda noodley, once again for lack of better term. There are creases in the elbows and knees that need to be shown, or else you get that noodle thing. ^.~ --- "When 900 years old you reach, look as good, you will not." ~Yoda |
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eegirlee (Reply)Total Posts: 477Mar 29, 2006 2:13 amI'm really getting grilled by people on this pic- ~ ~; Anywho, creases, add um, gotcha! ..., ..., ..., ^ ^; Um, how do you do that again? --- See the truth all around/Our faith can be broken/And our hands can be bound/But open our hearts and fill up the emptiness/With nothing to stop us/Is it not worth the risk?/Yeah,is it not worth the risk?~Our Lives,The Calling |
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clawed_demon (Reply)Total Posts: 64Mar 29, 2006 2:54 amGah, I don't know how to explain it. I will show you sometime. --- "When 900 years old you reach, look as good, you will not." ~Yoda |
