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A work-in-progress, done with 0.5 HB pencil
There's no shading yet, as i will do it once it's finished. And yes, there's alot, what i should fix about it.
References used: Ragnarök manga / manwha
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Submitted by: Brethesen
Posted: Feb 1, 2006 8:46 am
Completed: unknown
Critiques (4)Galleries: General, Original Art, Realism, Work In Progress
Keywords: unfinished, sketches, undesided
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 Lady Anime79Total Posts: 2839Feb 1, 2006 10:08 amAww, so you aren't listening to my advice then? --- Laughter is the best medicine and your face is curing the world. |
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Okay, well perhaps you can get some better results from others on here then. But I will honestly say that I am proud of you for taking up art now. And the more you draw, the more your skills will develop, blah blah blah. I won't give too much of a ciritque here since I already told you what I thought should be fixed. Anyway, good luck hun. I don't know when I will be on next, but I hope I will get to see this finished soon. All my love to you.
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 Brethesen (Reply)Total Posts: 453Feb 1, 2006 10:37 amWhat are you meaning, dear? Yes, i'm gonna listen to your advice and change it as you have instructed. It's still a work in progress >.< --- http://www.sinfest.net/archive_page.php?comicID=2504 Oh, how true this is... |
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Lady Anime79 (Reply)Total Posts: 2839Feb 1, 2006 10:52 amReally? --- Laughter is the best medicine and your face is curing the world. |
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Okay honey. But change it how YOU want. And not how I want you too. This is your beautiful art my love. And I am so anxious to see it all finished. ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_yes.gif)
And I was only joking before with what I said. I am glad that you are seeking out as much advice as you can. There are so many wonderful artists here whom I would be lost without. Minimaid for one. She has always guided me and helped me improve. Oh.. and Dennis is another one. Oh and Bogus Red, and Karana Kaou, and Arkillian. Arkillian is so awesome. So I hope she will give you some advice too. Anyway, I am so proud of you Joni. I love being able to share art with you now. ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_ponder.gif)
I look forward to watching your skills grow as you draw. ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15px_heart.gif)
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 themusicdiedTotal Posts: 967Feb 2, 2006 8:14 pmPersonally, I think it looks pretty good. The only thing I think could use a little more detail is the hair. You could try sweeping some little pieces of that out further. --- It's only those who have no idea what they're doing that are quick to demand they know what they're doing better then you. - themusicdied |
