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This is a piece I'm working on for an assignment in my conceptual illustration class. I don't want to get into the details of the assignment at the moment. This is still a work in progress. I'm thinking of moving the sword so that it's pointing down instead of up, that way I can crop off the top space and have the figure printed bigger when I present it. I still need to do something with the feet and legs. THey are mostly abstract shapes at the moment. I'll work on that.

After I've finished drawing I'm either going to paint it digitally or print it out and watercolor it. I should probably get the hang of watercolor so I guess I'll watercolor it. My professor Barron Storey told us in class today about this new stuff that is an acrylic base for pastels. you paint it on just about any surface, even smooth surfaces, and it will make it have a fibery, paper-like tooth so that you can use watercolor and other media that normally wouldn't work on a slick surface. So maybe I'll print this drawing out on thick glossy photo paper and then put some of that stuff on it and watercolor it.

My professor seems to like it so far. What are your thoughts on this? I'll post a revision tomorrow.

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"Generations"

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Submitted by: BogusRed

Posted: Feb 8, 2006 2:06 am

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: Biseinen, Fantasy, Original Art, Work In Progress

Keywords: fantasy, sword, elf, character, generations bit 2 wip

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arkillian

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Feb 8, 2006 2:26 am

The back needs to curve around more. The face looks a little digruntled for the pose too- that may just be me though ^^;

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Feb 9, 2006 12:08 pm

ok thanks. i'll work on it.

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karana kaou

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Feb 8, 2006 4:51 am

Susie, this is looking awesome! And I think the sword pointing upwards is a nice compositional feature...maybe not worth pointing downward? But give it a try, see how it looks. [emoticon] And I love the way you've wrapped the cape around him like that; billowing out around him, mimicking his hair...Can't wait to see this finished. It sounds like you're enjoying your class too, and that makes all the difference.

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Feb 9, 2006 12:08 pm

yeah this class is turning out to be a lot of fun. maybe i'll keep the sword up but find a way to push the legs up higher instead.

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LODAEV

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Feb 8, 2006 8:07 am

pretty susie. i love the strokes.

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Feb 9, 2006 12:07 pm

thank you Cole

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Elite Saiyajin Jenny

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Feb 10, 2006 11:18 am

I've always loved how you draw your figures, they're always so graceful-looking. But this guy's arms look a little thick for his body. I think maybe you should give the rest of him a little more muscle. But I love the cloak and the sword so far. Maybe instead of pointing the sword down, you could have him pointing it forward toward you; his pose doesn't really seem right for pointing the sword down. But that's just me ^^'

Great job!

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Feb 10, 2006 11:26 am

thank you Jenny for the comments. I'll work some more on him.

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Elite Saiyajin Jenny  (Reply)

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Feb 10, 2006 11:29 am

Anytime [emoticon]

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