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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.

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Ok guys help me out here. Not anatomy wise there's probably something wrong with that anyways...yeah there is I think his head is to small but that's not what I'm concerned about right now I'll fix that later. What I need advice on is his upper body suit. I'm doing an assignment for my drawing class a character development board. I chose my character Clay wearing his war suit. His original one is way different and way to plain so I decided to chage it. My idea was to have plates that look like muscles with out skin on his pecs, shoulders,back,forearms, claves,and abs and fill the rest in with black. That's my problem I'm thinking black might be to plain I had another idea to put mechanics (which would make sense for this character) rather than black. What do you guys think?? [emoticon]

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Submitted by: Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.

Posted: Mar 4, 2006 8:23 pm

Completed: unknown

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Keywords: anime, clay's warsuit (wip)

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arkillian

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Mar 4, 2006 9:43 pm

I'm not sure what the lines are ment to be, but my thoughts are on researching Tactical armour. Tactical armour is tight, and has bullet proof vests and stuff. There's alot of this stuff that's brought up in Spycraft- the RP game I play :3 Base it on them, and that's a hard core starting point [emoticon]

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)

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Mar 4, 2006 10:16 pm

The lines are suppose to look like muscles without skin. You know how stringy and sinuey (if that's a word) they look I probably did it wrong but I'll end up changing it later. I'll see if I can pull up some images from that game you mentioned. Thanks for the comment [emoticon]