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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.

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I'm all done with this! Finally! First of all let me get out that that is not my pose [emoticon] I got it from one of Christopher Hart's books so he takes credit for the pose while I take credit for the coloring and the character second, coloring this was a pain cause my tablet decided to stop working -_- so all of this is mouse work ugh... but I'm actually really happy with how the coloring came out! [emoticon] I think it's the best I've done yet. My teacher better gimme a good grade on this cause this was hard to color all with a mouse! *ahem* But anyways here it is all finished and spiffy like. I hope you all like him here's Clay!

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Submitted by: Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.

Posted: Mar 10, 2006 9:14 pm

Completed: Mar 10, 2006

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Galleries: Costume Design, Finished Work, General, Original Art, Sci-Fi

Keywords: anime, clay's warsuit all done!

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Saiyangirl4ever

Total Posts: 817

Mar 11, 2006 4:02 am

Wow! [emoticon] Great job hun!This piccy looks like a lot of work! And you did great! I just love his outfit!!!!And the character himself looks yummy! *ahem*Back to the piccy! I love the coloring!And shading is great too!The pose looks like a one hard to draw so well done hun!Awesome job!! You`re amazing! [emoticon] My love to you!

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)

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Mar 11, 2006 10:01 am

lol Thank you! Yeah he's one of my favorite original characters (and the hottest [emoticon] lol ) The coloring was real hard to get down because of my stupid mouse but I'm glad it came out nicely Thanks again for the comment

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fablespinner

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Mar 11, 2006 10:44 pm

This is a great action pose. Just one little thing to point out for next time. Watch the line of his thigh... the outer line is fine for muscle definition, but the inner thigh (of the foreshortened raised leg) should be straight, you've got it bent giving him almost a third joint in his leg.

Too late to change this now and wouldn't want you too eeks... just keep an eye out in the future (Goodness I made this mistake all the time myself) so I see it now.

Very nice job, action poses can be a real pain in the whatzzits

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)

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Mar 12, 2006 4:13 pm

Thanks! wow you're right I didn't even notice that [emoticon] so thanks for the heads up I'll keep my out for the next time Thanks again for the comment

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fablespinner (Reply)

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Mar 12, 2006 10:10 pm

I only notice now because I used to make the same mistake myself ALL THE BLEEDING TIME. I trained myself to look [emoticon] 99% of people won't notice. ~_^

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zacula

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Mar 12, 2006 4:53 am

I like the Pose Even if it came from another influence you captured it well, very dynamic. Reminds me of a Comic book pose mixed with an anime style... Mabye not your intention or maybe it is... either way I like it. good work. Good lighting too. He looks like he is about to slam the hell outta somethin'

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