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okies..just some random drawings i've been working on all day, off and on. this'll be my first piece entirley done on corel... geesh,lol. new programs are hard to work with sometimes...hehe. well please tell me what needs to be fixed in this scetch so that when i clean it up and color it, so that it comes out at least decent, okies? hehe. kks, well thanx [emoticon]

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Submitted by: grey wings

Posted: Mar 19, 2006 11:29 pm

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: General, Original Art, Romance, Work In Progress

Keywords: unkwon two, greywings, unknown, characters, original

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.

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Mar 20, 2006 7:15 pm

well let's see since this is supposedto be like a relaxing environment type pic I'd say relax the angel guy's shoulders he looks way to tense and try finding some ref pics for the girls pose she looks a bit stiff. But all in all I think it's lookin' good and Corel can be hard to pick up (i'm still trying to figure it out myself [emoticon] ) but I hope to see this one coolored soon

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grey wings (Reply)

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Mar 20, 2006 7:27 pm

awe great... home work,lol. yeah, i was thinking the same about the girl's pose... humm... okies.. refrences & relaxation..got it,lol. thanx for da tips [emoticon]