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Submitted by: Kat Scratch

Posted: Apr 9, 2006 11:31 am

Completed: Apr 7, 2006

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Galleries: Fantasy, Finished Work, Naruto, Romance

Keywords: kiss, naruto, ry-ry, passion

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Awww, I [smiley] this piccy. Ok its two of my characters Miari (girl) and Ry-ry (boy). Ry-ry has had a crush on Miari ever since she found him. and now he showed his true feelings for her, she seems to feel the same way too!

arkillian

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Apr 9, 2006 10:42 pm

Awe- that's sweet [smiley] I'm a little nastier to my characters- they're always glad to get what I give them- eventually! XD What kind of critical comments do you want on this hon?

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Kat Scratch (Reply)

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Apr 10, 2006 3:22 am

Well I really don't know, probably some comments to improve my picture [smiley]

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"Excuse me, mister hot pants, but this isn't exactly a fashion show here!" : Prince Vegeta [smiley]

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arkillian (Reply)

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Apr 10, 2006 5:05 am

First thing- I don't know how you ink, but use a black ink pen- it'll shapen up your lines, and make them blacker. A helpfull thing for drawing pictures of people kissing when you're not use to it is having a photo referance. The net is great for this, or go through stock photos in Deviantart. Every tenth pic is either a girl x boy or same sex kissing pic in the stock piles ^^; I keep a special section on my computer for referance pics as I come across them. Large grey scales for practicing at later dates, clothing referances, poses, and kissing- which is HARD.
Another big point to note is body stance. The guys stance it that of a guy that deaply cares for the girl, and has finally got her, but she is in a shy and withdrawn stance, which makes the couple uncertain, and him too dominating rather than mutual. What is beter, is if her hands were around him or down- not stopping him from comming closer. Bodys facing is intimate, sideways is friendship, and oppositing is hostile. Handy to remember- this applys to most pics. If someone pushes someone away, then there is hostility, and pulling in is closeness.

Some examples are (Sorry, I'm gonna use my art cause I can't be bother surfing ^^; )-
http://www.paperdemon.com/artview.php/id/4633.html Both facing eachother totally, and both pulling the other closer- VERY intimate
http://www.paperdemon.com/artview.php/id/4572.html Bodies facing, touching eachother, but her face is turned away- deap friendship but not quite love at this point
http://www.paperdemon.com/artview.php/id/4252.html Backs to eachother, but hands linking. Hostility between the two of them for reasons, but they secretly have feelings for the other that they can't share
http://www.paperdemon.com/artview.php/id/4163.html Bodies facing away from eachother, but one is holding the other, the other oblivious- Person has secret feelings for the other that they can't show for some reason.

This make any sence? It can be aplied to alot of poses. A scene can mean a heap of different things depending on how the body interacts with the surroundings. In the last pic, the guy is holding his sword, but looking toward the guy- that can be taking as him putting the other guy on a higher level to his sword- which is true.

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Kat Scratch (Reply)

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Apr 10, 2006 1:19 pm

Wow, I never really realised that! Thanks so much! [smiley] Ill try and remeber that for later pics of them, your awsome!

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arkillian (Reply)

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Apr 10, 2006 2:50 pm

Sure thing [smiley] Keep asking for crit, and I'll try to keep giving it ^^

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Keenarnor

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Aug 1, 2006 3:33 pm

Awww how sweet [smiley]

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