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Brook_and_Athena_Lineart_by_arkillian

Brook and Athena Lineart

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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. won my crossover competition that I did on my Deviantart site here-. thumb As a prize, I'm drawing both of our characters in a picture. Origanally she asked if she could have Alex and Athena (my characters), Clay and Brook (Her characters) hanging out and stuff, but I was thinking 'Ah!!! Too many people for brain to handle at the moment!!' so we agreed on Athena and Brook. I thought it would be totally cool to have them hanging out in a mall, which is where the poses came from cause Athena is kind of shy, being that she was shunned for her whole life, and to act like a girl is weird for her, and Brook is totally outrageous and spunky ^^ Heck, if she can keep Clay in tow XD Anyways, Athena is on the left, holding a staff cause the bags looked WRONG, and Brook grabbing a gun (right). I like this set up, cause it's nice to see Athena girly, and Brook is so flirty showing off her goods XD *notices Clay fall on floor in BG*

The chibis in the BG is of Clay and Alex thumb ,- shown here. The Clay (left in both pics) is saying "Why do I give in to her?" and Alex (right) is like... *dealing with it- Athena is too scarey to argue against*

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Submitted by: arkillian

Posted: May 24, 2006 2:00 am

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: General, Misc Fanart (other), Work In Progress

Keywords: brook and athena lineart, brook, athena

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Kichi

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May 24, 2006 12:55 pm

very nice start- I am assuming your coloring this though- if not- awesome pic! [emoticon]

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arkillian  (Reply)

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May 24, 2006 2:29 pm

It's a WIP, so yes [emoticon] There isn't many I'd post here and not colour. My problem now is finding time to colour it ^^;

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May 25, 2006 9:37 pm

This looks great so far. The expressions on their faces is really nicely done as well as the poses.

This is a small thing to watch out for. Tangents. Attached is a diagram showing where you've got a couple tangents. they are easy fixes. here's a link describing what tangents are:

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arkillian  (Reply)

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May 25, 2006 11:58 pm

Where do you see them? The whole thing overlaps as far as I can see (I never knew they were called tangents... ^^; )

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May 26, 2006 12:43 am

whoops. i included the wrong file with my vis crit. sorry about that. see the new one.

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arkillian  (Reply)

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May 26, 2006 8:00 pm

LOL! It makes alot more sence now!! *huggles BR and her confusion* I'll remember to touch those lines up for the colouring stage. Heck- I actually did pretty good since this was all off the top of my head ^^; LOL!

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May 27, 2006 10:33 am

yeah this is a really great drawing.

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