Zarbon and Bulma WIP 2

Posted May 30, 2006, 6:43:28 AM UTC
This is a work-in-progress concept art piece for Surviving Together. This is a revision of Art thumbnail . I just wanted to post the improved version before I went to bed. I might not have a chance to get back to this until the weekend. Tomorrow is my first day at Google.

I fixed problems with the balance that a bunch of people noticed. I thought maybe it was because people didn't catch the whole "dutch angle" effect but actually they were still off balance even with the dutch angle. Thanks to Arkillian for pointing this out to me. I tried doing a new position for the arms but it wasn't working out so i just went back to the way it was before. Also WildeKarde said the old version looked like Bulma was slipping down so I've tried to fix that by tilting her torso to be higher and her legs lower than before. I also tweaked Zarbon's legs a little.

This is my final line work. I will move on to color from here. If there are small things that need attention, please tell me.

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  • Aug 9, 2006, 4:50:46 PM UTC
    MY ZARBIE BARBIE!!!

    >.>

    Don't ask... Or you can in a E-mail...


    Loves,
    The lil' black cat girl
  • Jul 11, 2006, 11:20:29 PM UTC
    your art is truely amazing, its the thing that got me to join here.
    great pic
  • Jun 1, 2006, 12:49:03 PM UTC
    I can't roast you it's too awesome!
  • May 31, 2006, 12:15:22 PM UTC
    I think it looks great. Can't wait to see it in color Smile It's a very sweet lookin' drawing.
  • May 30, 2006, 7:18:36 AM UTC
    Something about his left hand...it doesn't seem right. It doesn't really look like he's holding her. Like, wouldn't his fingers curve with her body more?

    Other than that, it's very nice. Smile I can't wait to see it finished! Whee!
    • Jun 3, 2006, 9:02:41 AM UTC
      yeah i need a red pen crit on the hand. I didn't want it to look too much like his other hand because it causes the twinning effect but i'm not really sure what else to do with it.
      • Jun 3, 2006, 10:35:20 AM UTC
        That, I'm afraid I can't help you with. Sweat Drop I got enough art smarts to see something's not quite right with it, but actually fixing it is a step above my current abilities. Laughing Sorry.
        • Jun 3, 2006, 10:51:37 AM UTC
          Le sigh... Woe is me... For where art thou is a good red pen critic...
  • May 30, 2006, 2:31:25 AM UTC
    Great work! I wish, I could work proportions out so good like you. Im waiting for the final work to see.

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