Unspoken Vegeta becomes King

Posted Dec 7, 2004, 3:26:25 AM UTC

This is another composition I did to practice designing a comic book page. I probably spent 20 to 40 minutes on it. I'm just trying to figure out where to place things on the page. This is from the prologue of LavenderGoddessV's fanfic Unspoken. Here, Vegeta is defeating his father and taking his place as king.

Here is what they are saying:
King Vegeta: "Please, my son, stop this madness!"
Vegeta: "So, any last words Father?"
King Vegeta: "Yes... You, boy, are not fit to take my place as king. You are too soft just like your mother!"

Comments

Crystal Lasill
Aug 9, 2006, 5:21:12 PM UTC
Wow... You need to do some of King Vegeta... *Day dreams about the king*

Yah defenatly...

Loves,
The lil' black cat girl
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709
Jan 12, 2006, 7:17:24 PM UTC
This is one of my favorite pics on the site because it shows how superior Vegeta is to his Slimebag of a father. I hate King V. with a passion so intense i think i burnt myself. (if you want to hear that Story just PM me and I'll write that story for you). Anyway, I love the art you are very talented. Keep up the good work. You should do more with this comic too it would be fun to read.
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- BogusRed
  Jan 12, 2006, 10:28:12 PM UTC
  thanks for the comments.
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Tameka
Oct 17, 2005, 9:02:29 AM UTC
It OK but try again
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Cat-rocker
Jun 11, 2005, 10:30:04 AM UTC
*lol* very good, I love the way you made it a bit serious but a bit jokey too! You should work on comics more often! :vegeta:
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- klomzorn
  Jun 11, 2005, 3:02:27 PM UTC
  awsome:bardock:
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186
Mar 3, 2005, 3:36:46 PM UTC
That is so cool! You should do more comic strips, especially of Veggie. ^_^ I love your work.
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- BogusRed
  Mar 4, 2005, 7:48:14 AM UTC
  thank you
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Amanda Warener
Jan 15, 2005, 12:50:25 PM UTC
I love Vegeta
Vegeyta is cool
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debbiechan
Jan 11, 2005, 9:05:11 AM UTC
cool. You're marvelously talented. I love all the forms in the panels.
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Sliverbane
Dec 9, 2004, 7:50:08 PM UTC
Great storyboard. I like the various angles/perspectives you chose. It adds a wonderful element of suspense to the scene.
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- Brethesen
  Dec 12, 2004, 4:38:47 AM UTC
  Silverbane, you're right about those angles/perspectives and i like it too!! It remind's me of Children of Bodom's music video Every Time I Die... A great music video, if you dig Metal music X)
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