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Well- I had difficulty naming this one. Fire Brand suited it, but that's taken sadly ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_sad.gif)
So I kinda when- what else. Well, he has Pheonix wings... so how about that?
Anyways- a long way off finishing. Still playing with firey wings. Gonna enter this to ~Bishie-Harlem 's competition for designing a character. I figure Alex is the best cause even though he's a sightly above average looking guy rather than flat out HOT, he has a personality that is totally... wow. Maybe he'll score brownie points for coolness rather than hotness ^^ Most of my characters are cool rather than hot though. It feels shallow making them hot. Got to tell the girls in the world breathe- right? ^^
Anyways- Alex Dragon with Firey wings.... again. This time with clothes on XD AH!! A pic with clothes on!!!!! *goes insane*
BTW- want roasting on concepts and how stuff flows- nitty pick stuff like a colour over the edge is fine at the moment. It's still WIP ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_smile.gif)
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Submitted by: arkillian
Posted: Jun 7, 2006 2:55 am
Completed: unknown
Critiques (21)Galleries: Bishounen, Fantasy, Original Art, Work In Progress
Keywords: alex dragon, dragon twins, fire, pheonix eyes wip
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 gatorchasTotal Posts: 853Jun 7, 2006 5:27 amLike the way the wings are coming out. The pose you pick is prefect, he looks as if he going to lanch at any second....coming along great can't wait to see it done.... ---
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 arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 7, 2006 2:19 pmYeah- I imediatly pictured wings on him when I did this pose. It was kind of knightly and offensive at the same time. I got to get the fire characteristics right though- may take some thought.... --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 7, 2006 4:41 pmMe too, but it's still got a long way to go before it's finished... --- |
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 Vincent ValentineTotal Posts: 216Jun 7, 2006 11:22 amThe wings look way cool man! I also like the pose. ^/^ It really looks great,nice shading by the way. *Faves* --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 7, 2006 2:17 pmThanks --- |
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 DollmakerTotal Posts: 2461Jun 7, 2006 5:55 pmWow, this is looking fabulous! --- |
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The wings look great, but they don't really look like a part of him, beacuse he's inked with a black outline, and the wings look airbrushed and apart from him. Maybe it's just me, though...![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_pacman.gif)
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 7, 2006 6:13 pmYeah- he's not shaded at all and has no reflection off the fire yet. That'll come when I've done the fire as the blending of the colour will --- |
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Dollmaker (Reply)Total Posts: 2461Jun 7, 2006 6:18 pmAh, I figured there was a reason for it. --- |
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 Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S.Total Posts: 2394Jun 7, 2006 8:29 pmAwesome^^ It's coming out nicely. The pose kicks ass! --- |
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And the wings are wicked too. I hope you win good luck ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_thumbsup.gif)
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 7, 2006 9:05 pmNever won any contest yet so I'm not holding my breath XD It'll be a first if I do win though ^^ --- |
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Jill V. -S.T.A.R.S. (Reply)Total Posts: 2394 |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 8, 2006 1:44 pmLast comp I entered (the elf love pic) was canceled, the one before hasn't been marked yet (pic of the orca child), and the ones before that didn't win- I just have bad luk I guess :p --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 11, 2006 10:58 pmI don't mind if I do or don't- seriously? I only enter to support the artist. If they have too many entries, I'll double think whether I enter or not. --- |
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 MinimaidTotal Posts: 1896Jun 8, 2006 1:55 pmI really like seeing how your style is developing and becoming more and more defined, Soozie! I definitely like the effect of the blur that we get from the foreground part of the wing on our left. I think it looks far more 'firey' than does the solid triangular shape of the foreground right piece. Actually, come to think of it, the left-hand wing effects in general seem particularly well-developed... The right, I'm assuming, then, you haven't finished yet. --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 8, 2006 3:19 pmActually- the wing on the left is the only thing developed in this pic XD Heheh- I'm developing though? This is good to know ^^ I'm slooooowly getting use to digetal- it's not as easy as it looks, as you could sympathise with I guess --- |
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Minimaid (Reply)Total Posts: 1896Jun 8, 2006 10:24 pmThe lady at the post office said that the commish could be as late as the end of June, unfortunately. But she also told me that we shouldn't worry. If something goes wrong, it will be sent back to me, and I'll just have to put it through again. --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 8, 2006 10:59 pm*whimpers* --- |
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 NakiechefTotal Posts: 108Jun 9, 2006 10:11 pmThis is very nice, I especially like the blurred effect of the wings up in the foreground. My only real criticism is that the character sticks out too much, so the wings look more in the background than part of him. Not sure how you'd fix that, but I thought I'd put it out there. I like it though! ^_^ --- |
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arkillian (Reply)Total Posts: 2930Jun 9, 2006 10:33 pmBe fixing that by giving him shading and a wash of red, with red lighting --- |
