Kagome

Mmm, not bad! I like this pic. Just watch out for her face; her chin looks off centre. Also, her hands are a little odd, especially the one down below because it looks like the thumb is pointing out when it should be pointing in.
All in all, this is really nice. I like the way you shaded the green parts of her uniform, and I think it would've been good to increase the contrast on other areas so that they look shaded (for example, the white on the collar and the sleeves). I know, it's hard to tell with pencil crayons and a scanner

Very nice. Her hand that she has to her face looks a wee bit off but other than that very nice. I love the affect you got with the color pencils also.

Cool kagome! How come her hair is brown? it's really good though

I like this picture of Kagoma, the coloring is pretty cool!

Is this inked, or did you sketch it with the pen to begin with? If it's the latter, then that's just plain awesome. <3

The colors are nice--but I think (although I might only be getting this impression from the comment-string on my art o~o) That you've colored a little too quickly. It helps to slow down, keep your pencils sharp, and apply color in layers of soft pressure.

I agree with most of the other criticism you've received and can't really think of much else to add. So uh... nice. xD (Sorry if this double-posts. It brought up that "Cannot Find Server" error when I tried to post, so I refreshed the art and the comment hadn't gone through yet.)