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Ok. So here I have a new drawing that I wanted advice on.  Not that I am having troubke with anything, amazingly enough.  Just I want to make sure it comes out perfect. I really want to make a beautiful piece of art I can REALLY be proud of.  So your help would be appreciated. [emoticon]

Ok. To the right is Allison, One of my closest friends. The left is me.  I want to really make this a realism piece, because lately all I do is anime. So, I am definately going to be adding all teh more realistic features to the faces so they dont look so anime like. But yes, This is what I have so far. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you all very much.

BTW They are not naked. I am going to draw in the clothes soon, I am just making sure that the body and all that is ok.
Just wanted to make sure that was understood because I got a few people thinking they were naked. >_>

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Submitted by: AnimeBoyToyKoibito

Posted: Jul 25, 2006 9:47 pm

Completed: unknown

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Galleries: Bishoujo, Original Art, Work In Progress

Keywords: dancing doves, realism, original art

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BogusRed

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Jul 26, 2006 10:30 pm

Hi AnimeBoyToy,
You want a roast? You've got one!

This is going great so far. The poses are really nice. However, there are some porportional issues that should be resolved before moving to ink and color. I noticed that the heads are unusually large. It is common for artists to draw important things bigger than other parts. We often draw the eyes too big without realizing it because we are trying so hard to makethem look good. See the visual crit that I've attached to this comment.

Hope this helps

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AnimeBoyToyKoibito  (Reply)

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Jul 26, 2006 10:35 pm

Oh Thank you very much! This helps me out alot! I felt that something was off about it, but I couldnt quite place my finger on it.
[emoticon] Thank you for the grand help!

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Jul 26, 2006 11:21 pm

you're very welcome!

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Keenarnor

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Aug 13, 2006 2:11 pm

Nice...but a little light i guess *shrugs*

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