Mizu

Posted Sep 20, 2006, 10:55:33 PM UTC

My first try at detailing clothing (Please comment either good or bad so i can work better)

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  • Sep 20, 2006, 7:47:25 PM UTC
    Since you want it- my thoughts on the clothing.

    It's a good start- the lines need to slope down more if they're hanging- not sure if the kid is ment to be chubby or not

    Around the chest, the lines would crease horozontally at the bottom ofthe jumper and straight down at the arm pits.

    There's too sever of a crease marking around the knees- it does natrally crinkle there cause of the knee bending, but it would only be a loose bend cause the pants aren't tight. The bottom of the pants is well done though

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